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How to Write a Perfect Cover Letter for a Short Story Submission

Editors see mounds of bad cover letters. A lot of new writers submit short stories with little or no guidance and end up submitting cover letters that are either overenthusiastic or lacking the necessary information.

What you must know is that cover letters for different genres follow different sets of rules and etiquette. For example, an editor doesn’t expect you to write a cover letter for short fiction in the same format you would craft a query letter for a novel submission.

A cover letter is not a platform for you to brag about yourself or your writing accolades. There’s nothing that annoys an editor more than a cocky newbie.

Your cover letter is, most often than not, the first thing an editor sees and you have to be on point to create a strong first impression. Some editors that I have interacted with said that they read the cover letter after reading your short stories, and they admit that some cover letters convince them to go back to the story and reevaluate it.

Luckily for you, I have compiled tips on just how to go about crafting a good cover letter that can make a ‘strong first impression’ and influence the editor’s aftertaste after savoring your stories.

Research and… Research

In all the posts that I have made on cover letters, I have emphasized the importance of finding out the publisher’s/organizer’s guidelines.

Every organizer/publisher has a specific set of rules for short story cover letters, and knowledge and application of these guidelines raises the chances of your submission getting accepted.

You should research the publisher’s inclinations. Some publishers, or should I say most, won’t accept adult stories. They may not disclose these attitudes in their Ts and Cs, but an exploratory look at their published works can reveal what kind of genre they love to publish.

Tips on Creating a Perfect Cover Letter for a Short Story Submission

A good cover letter for a short story submission should be:

Short and Simple

Cover letters for short fiction always have to have the conciseness element. It should be short and simple but compelling enough; it has to signal to the editor that you’re at least a refined writer.

Courteous and Direct

It is unprofessional to send a cover letter that is copied and pasted from previous submissions. The cover letter should address the editor or publishers and must contain information relevant to that particular submission.

Professional

Although a good cover letter is supposed to be courteous, it doesn’t have to get too personal. The editor doesn’t really care if you know their name (although it’s okay to address them by their name if they suggested so), but the contents of the cover letter must remain professional.

How to Address a Cover Letter

It is advisable to leave niceties and go straight to business. I have read a couple of blogs by real editors, and they all agree on one thing: go straight to business.

If you’re going to make multiple submissions to different recipients, you have to make sure you don’t put too much effort into ‘playing the nice newbie’ and just focus on making the cover letter a contextually right letter.

What should be in a cover letter?

I didn’t want to ramble on about something I didn’t know anything about, so I decided to give you a list of things that Neil Clarke (a real-life editor from Clarkesworld Magazine) wants to see in your cover letter for short stories:

  • State whether you are previously published or not.
  • If you’re submitting work that you did not author (maybe you’re the author’s agent or something), you have to state it in the cover letter. You have to explain the working arrangement with the author or if you’re translating.
  • And if you state that you are submitting a translation, you should say whether the story was originally published and where, in what language, and whether the original author or whoever holds the rights on the original has given you the permission to translate and publish.
  • If you are submitting a reprint, the cover letter should state this and any restrictions placed on the reprint.
  • If your short story doesn’t fit in one of the categories that the publisher has listed, the cover letter must explain what type of genre it is.

The cover letter also needs to contain a short bio, the story’s word count, title, and a brief description of the short story (not summary), among other things.

Publishers and editors have unique preferences, so you’ll find what ‘unique’ things they want in your cover letter.

Don’t Put These in Your Cover Letter

Going back to Neil Clarke’s preferences (most of which are shared by most editors), these things shouldn’t be in a cover letter:

  • Bank or PayPal details.
  • Mailing address or phone number (This might not be the case for all editors/publishers). In Clarke’s case, the mailing addressing should be on the first page of the story.
  • A summary of your short story.

But I said in the previous section, every editor and publisher has their own preferences.

Don’t Say These in Your Short Story Cover letter

Cover letters rarely influence editors’ opinions of a story, but some things can annoy an editor. Although they’re likely not going to reject the story because of some ‘little things’ in your short story’s cover letter, it’s wise to stay on the safe side.

Confidence is good, but you don’t have to be arrogant. For instance, you don’t have to say “I’m the modern-day Charles Dickens.”

And… you know it’s so ‘amateur hour’ when you say, “This is the best story you’ll ever read.” Trust me, it’s not. Editors have read thousands of stories and it’s better to let them ‘choose’ which is the best they’ve ever read.

Even though it’s bad to sound cocky in your cover letter, it’s equally damning to show low self-esteem. So, in your cover letter, you have to avoid writing things like ‘how desperate you’re’ or ‘how many times your story has been rejected.’ Those won’t help your case at all!

Formats and Submission Guidelines

If you haven’t found this out already, some publications put so much emphasis on the format of short story submissions. Some publications will give you specifications for font size, line spacing, margins, etcetera. It’s either you format everything the way they tell you to, or it’s an instant REJECTION for you!

However, some publications don’t go that far, but most of them let you know that If you don’t follow their pocket-size guidelines, you might as well just keep your story to yourself.

Outside the typing window, there are other formatting issues that you have to be aware of. Things like file type (e.g., PDF, RTF, Word Doc, etcetera.) and the means of submitting (e.g., email, or through the publication’s website). A few old guards still require writers to submit stories in print—yes, inconveniently, through the postal service.

The submission guidelines may extend to the manner of attaching documents (and the number of those attachments). Hopefully, the publications you’re submitting to allow you to submit attachments (which is the most likely nowadays).

Sample Cover Letter for a Short Story Submission

There are more than a thousand ways you can write your cover letter for a short story submission. In case you don’t have the littlest idea of how to go about it, I have written a very brief cover letter.

Note : This is a sample and cannot be used as a blueprint for any short fiction submission. Well, you could use it if you think it’s okay; I mean, it’s not bad.

Dear Maggie (if you don’t know their name, just put their professional title like Editor), Please consider this 2000-word story, “Dying Good,” for publication in the Sun Dance Magazine . I believe this short fiction piece is exactly the type of story that the Sun Dance typically publishes. “Dying Good” is a tale of betrayal, anger, and—ultimately—redemption. It follows a man on his journey from the gallows of degeneracy to salvation. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, Ed Halfords.

This cover letter is exactly 67 words (without that bracketed explanation) and even if you were to add some details, which is a likely thing, it wouldn’t be anywhere near 150 words. In such a short piece, you can put all the required information and still avoid taking much of the editor’s time.

Final Words on Cover Letters for a Short Story Submission

You shouldn’t have to worry about writing an out-of-this-world cover letter when submitting your short story. That will only make the process seem like a very challenging task—but, in all honesty, it isn’t. I believe that I covered all the ‘life-saving’ tips that you can use to make your story submission a seamless task.

I’m not an editor (well, not by profession), but I did my research and contacted some ‘editor friends’ of mine before I got down to write this post.

As long as you do your research, keep your cover letters for short stories short, and always stick to the point, omit anything else, your short story is ready for submission!

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The Perfect Cover Letter: Advice From a Lit Mag Editor

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Today’s guest post is from Elise Holland, co-founder and editor of 2 Elizabeths , a short fiction and poetry publication.

When submitting your short-form literature to a magazine or journal, your cover letter is often the first piece of writing an editor sees. It serves as an introduction to your thoughtfully crafted art. As such, it is significant, but it shouldn’t be intimidating or even take much time to write.

As editor at 2 Elizabeths , I see a variety of cover letters every day; some are excellent, and others could stand to be improved. There are a few key pieces of information to include, while keeping them short and sweet. In fact, a cover letter should only be a couple of paragraphs long, and no more than roughly 100-150 words.

A little research goes a long way

Seek out the editor’s name, and address the letter to him/her, as opposed to using a generic greeting. Typically, you can find this information either on the magazine or journal’s website, or in the submission guidelines.

Read the submission guidelines thoroughly. Many publications will state in their guidelines the exact details that need to be included in a cover letter. With some variation, a general rule of thumb is to include the following:

  • Editor’s name (if you can locate it)
  • Genre/category
  • Brief description of your piece
  • If you have been published previously, state where
  • Whether your piece is a simultaneous submission (definition below)

Terms to Know

The term simultaneous submission means that you will be sending the same piece to several literary magazines or journals at the same time. Most publications accept simultaneous submissions, but some do not. If a publication does not accept them, this will be stated in their guidelines.

Should your work be selected for publication by one magazine, it is important to notify other publications where you have submitted that piece. This courtesy will prevent complications, and will keep you in good graces with various editors, should you wish to submit to them again in the future.

The term multiple submission means that you are submitting multiple pieces to the same literary magazine or journal.

Cover Letter That Needs Work

Dear Editor, Here is a collection of poems I wrote that I’d like you to consider. I have not yet been published elsewhere. Please let me know what you think. Bio: John Doe is an Insurance Agent by day and a writer by night, living in Ten Buck Two. He is the author of a personal blog, LivingWith20Cats.com. Best, John Doe

What Went Wrong?

John Doe didn’t research the editor’s name. A personal greeting is always better than a simple “Dear Editor.” Additionally, John failed to include the word count, title and a brief description of his work.

There is no need to state that John has not yet been published elsewhere. He should simply leave that piece of information out. (Many publications, 2 Elizabeths included, will still welcome your submissions warmly if you are unpublished.)

John included a statement asking the editor to let him know what he/she thinks about his work. Due to time constraints, it is rare that an editor sends feedback unless work is going to be accepted.

Unless otherwise specified by the magazine or journal to which you are submitting, you do not need to include biographical information in your cover letter. Typically, that information is either requested upfront but in a separate document from the cover letter, or is not requested until a piece has been selected for publishing.

Cover Letter Ready to Be Sent

Dear Elise, Please consider this 1,457-word short fiction piece, “Summer.” I recently participated in the 2 Elizabeths Open Mic Night, and am an avid reader of the fiction and poetry that you publish. “Summer” is a fictitious tale inspired by the impact of a whirlwind, yet meaningful, romance I experienced last year. In this story, I gently explore the life lessons associated with young love, with a touch of humor. This is a simultaneous submission, and I will notify you if the piece is accepted elsewhere. Thank you for your consideration. Kindest Regards, John Doe

What Went Right?

In this letter, John includes all pertinent information, while keeping his letter clear and concise. In his second sentence, John also briefly states how he is familiar with the magazine. While doing this isn’t required, if done tastefully, it can be a nice touch! Another example might be: “I read and enjoyed your spring issue, and believe that my work is a good fit for your magazine.”

I hope these sample letters help you as you send your short works to magazines and journals for consideration. While you’re at it, I hope you will check out 2 Elizabeths ! We would love to read your work.

Elise Holland

Elise Holland is co-founder and editor of 2 Elizabeths , a short fiction and poetry publication. Her work has appeared in various publications, most recently in Story a Day . Through 2 Elizabeths, Elise strives to create value and visibility for writers, through writing contests , events , and more!

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Love this! The letter is short and to the point, and covers all the necessary information. Great tips! I always worry that the only publishing credit I have is the winning entry in a short story contest through the local paper. Should I mention that? And writing conferences I’ve attended?

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As Elise says, it’s OK if you’re unpublished. Don’t worry about it. But feel free to mention your winning entry. If the writing conferences would likely be known to the journals’ editors, you might mention one or two.

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Thanks for the concise and useful information! I’ve heard that it’s also a good idea to include a sentence or two that makes it clear that you are familiar with the kind of work the magazine has published in the past. Is this generally advised, or would you consider it nonessential unless specified in the submission guidelines?

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10 Impressive Cover Letter Examples for Short Story Submission

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Hey fellow writers!

Are you an aspiring short story writer looking to get your work published? Well then, you’ll definitely need a killer cover letter to accompany your submission. But, writing a cover letter can be a daunting task and sometimes, you might not even know where to start.

Don’t worry, we’ve got you covered! We have compiled some cover letter examples for short story submission that will help you get started and show you what works and what doesn’t. You can use these examples and edit them as per your need.

Remember, your cover letter is your first impression on the editor, so you want it to be the best it can be. It’s your chance to show them who you are as a writer and why your story is worth publishing.

So, go ahead and check out our cover letter examples for short story submission. We’re confident they will help you craft the perfect cover letter that will make your work stand out!

The Best Structure for Cover Letter Examples for Short Story Submission

Submitting a short story can be a nerve-wracking experience. You’ve spent countless hours crafting your story, and now it’s time to send it out into the world. But before you hit send, it’s important to make sure that your cover letter is as polished as your story. Not sure where to start? Here’s the best structure for cover letter examples for short story submission.

First, start with the basics. Include the name of the publication you’re submitting to, the title of your story, and your contact information. It’s also a good idea to personalize your greeting by addressing the editor by name, if possible.

Next, move on to a brief summary of your story. This should be no more than a paragraph or two and should give the editor a sense of what your story is about. It’s important to be clear and concise here, as the editor may be reading hundreds of submissions.

After your summary, it’s time to talk a bit about yourself. This doesn’t need to be a long bio, but you should include any relevant writing experience or publications. If you don’t have any past publications, that’s okay! Simply mention why you enjoy writing and what inspired you to write this particular story.

Finally, it’s time to wrap up your letter. Thank the editor for their time and consideration, and let them know that you look forward to hearing back from them. It’s also a good idea to include a sentence about your availability in case the editor has any questions or wants to discuss your story further.

Overall, the best structure for cover letter examples for short story submission is one that is clear, concise, and professional. Keep in mind that the purpose of your cover letter is to get the editor excited to read your story, so make sure that your letter is engaging and well-written. Good luck!

Cover Letter Examples for Short Story Submission

Recommendation for publication.

Dear [Editor’s name],

I am excited to submit my short story [Story Title] for publication in [Journal/Magazine Name]. The engaging plot and character development make this story a perfect fit for your publication.

[Paragraph 1] This story follows the journey of [Character name], who [brief plot summary]. With twists and turns throughout, the reader is engaged until the very end. I believe [Journal/Magazine Name] readers will thoroughly enjoy this piece.

[Paragraph 2] As an experienced writer with several published works, I understand the importance of a good fit between writer and publication. This is why I think my writing style, which is [briefly describe writing style and how it fits your submission], is perfect for your readers.

Thank you for considering my submission. I look forward to the opportunity to share my work with your readers.

Best regards, [Your Name]

Request for Feedback

I am writing to submit my short story [Story Title] for your consideration and feedback. As an aspiring writer, I am always looking to improve my craft, and I believe your expert feedback can provide valuable insights.

[Paragraph 1] This story follows the journey of [Character name], who [brief plot summary]. With twists and turns throughout, the reader is engaged until the very end. I believe there is ample opportunity for growth and improvement in this piece, and I would appreciate your guidance.

[Paragraph 2] As a reader of [Journal/Magazine Name], I admire the quality of work that you publish. Your feedback, both positive and constructive, would be an incredible learning experience for me.

Thank you for considering my submission. I look forward to hearing back from you and incorporating your suggestions into my writing.

Sincerely, [Your Name]

Request for Partial Payment

I am writing to submit my short story [Story Title] for your consideration and to request partial payment under your guidelines. I have read and understand your submission requirements for payment and am happy to meet all the necessary criteria for eligibility.

[Paragraph 1] This story follows the journey of [Character name], who [brief plot summary]. With twists and turns throughout, the reader is engaged until the very end, and I believe it will be a great addition to your publication.

[Paragraph 2] As a professional writer, I take great pride in my work, and it would be an honor to have my writing published in [Journal/Magazine Name]. I understand that partial payment is offered under certain circumstances, and I meet all the requirements. Therefore, I am requesting payment of [Amount] as stipulated in your guidelines.

Thank you for considering my submission. I look forward to hearing back from you.

Request for Exemption from Submission Fee

I am submitting my short story [Story Title] for your consideration and am requesting an exemption from the submission fee. I have read and understand your guidelines, and my submission meets all the necessary criteria for fee exemption.

[Paragraph 2] As a writer with a limited budget, the submission fee poses a financial burden that I am unable to afford at this time. I assure you that I meet all the criteria for fee exemption, including [briefly list your eligibility criteria as per the submission guidelines].

Thank you for considering my submission and exemption request. I appreciate your support for aspiring writers.

Re-Submission of Revised Short Story

I am submitting my revised short story [Story Title] for your consideration. Thank you for your thoughtful feedback on my original submission, which helped me to enhance the strengths of my piece.

[Paragraph 1] This revised version of the story follows the journey of [Character name], who [brief plot summary]. With improved character development and a more engaging plot, I believe this version better showcases my writing strengths and is a better fit for your publication.

[Paragraph 2] As someone who values quality feedback, I appreciate the time and effort you took to review my previous submission. Incorporating your feedback has improved the quality of my writing, and I believe it will help the story resonate with readers.

Thank you for considering my re-submission. I look forward to hearing back from you.

Recommendation for Award Consideration

Dear [Award Committee Chair’s name],

I am excited to submit my short story [Story Title] for consideration for [Award Name]. The engaging plot, strong character development, and vivid imagery make this story a true literary gem.

[Paragraph 1] This story follows the journey of [Character name], who [brief plot summary]. The plot twists and character development are masterfully crafted, keeping the reader engaged until the very end. As an accomplished writer with several published works, I believe this story ranks among my best and is worthy of consideration for the [Award Name].

[Paragraph 2] Winning this award would be a dream come true, and I am grateful for the opportunity to be considered. I appreciate the time and effort that goes into judging submissions for [Award Name], and I have great respect for the judges’ discernment.

Thank you for considering my submission for the [Award Name].

Request for Expedited Review

I am writing to submit my short story [Story Title] for your consideration and request an expedited review. The unique plot and engaging characters make this a must-read story, and I am excited to hear back from you as soon as possible.

[Paragraph 2] I understand the volume of submissions you receive, and I appreciate any effort to expedite the review process. As a writer, I am eager to receive feedback and hope to hear back from you soon.

Thank you for considering my submission, and I look forward to hearing back from you.

Cover Letter Tips for Short Story Submissions

Submitting a short story can be an exciting and daunting process. Along with the submission itself, you’ll need to provide a compelling cover letter that captures the editor’s attention. Here are some tips for creating a cover letter that will make your submission stand out:

  • Address the editor by name: Research the publication and the editor’s name to make your letter more personal. Addressing the editor directly shows that you have taken the time to do your homework and are serious about your submission.
  • Introduce yourself: Briefly introduce yourself and mention any relevant writing experience or publications. This helps establish your credibility and shows that you have a track record of writing.
  • Summarize your story: Provide a brief summary of your story, highlighting the unique angle or selling point. This gives the editor a taste of what they can expect from your submission and helps them understand why it would be a good fit for their publication.
  • Mention your writing style: If you have a specific writing style that sets you apart, mention it in your letter. For example, if you write in a particular genre or have a distinct voice, let the editor know. This helps them get a sense of your tone and writing style.
  • Thank the editor: Use the closing paragraph to express gratitude for the editor’s time and consideration. Sign off with your name and contact information.

Remember, your cover letter is your chance to showcase your writing skills and make a memorable impression on the editor. By following these tips, you can create a compelling cover letter that will increase your chances of getting your short story published.

FAQs for Cover Letter Examples for Short Story Submissions What should be included in a cover letter for a short story submission?

A cover letter for a short story submission should include a brief introduction, the title and word count of the story, a short synopsis, any relevant publication credits, and a professional closing.

Is it necessary to mention the word count of the short story in the cover letter?

Yes, it is crucial to mention the word count of the short story in the cover letter. Many publishers have specific guidelines for story lengths, and by mentioning the word count, you can ensure that your story is considered for publication.

Can I mention my personal information, such as age and gender, in the cover letter?

No, it is not necessary to mention your personal information, such as age and gender, in the cover letter. Your writing should stand on its own merit, and your personal demographics do not affect the quality of your work.

What type of language should I use in the cover letter?

You should use a formal and professional tone in the cover letter. Avoid using overly casual language or slang. Additionally, you should proofread your cover letter to ensure there are no grammatical or spelling errors.

Should I mention any prior publications in the cover letter?

Yes, you should mention any prior publications in the cover letter. If you have previously been published in literary magazines or other publications, it can add to your credibility as a writer.

Can I make changes to the cover letter after submitting my short story?

No, you should not make any changes to the cover letter after submitting your short story. The cover letter is your first impression to the publisher, and making edits or changes can reflect poorly on your professionalism.

Is it acceptable to include a bio in the cover letter?

Yes, it is acceptable to include a short bio in the cover letter. However, the bio should be brief and relevant to your writing experience and accomplishments.

Wrapping It Up

So there you have it, folks – some cover letter examples for short story submission! By now, you should have a better understanding of how to approach your cover letter, and what to include and avoid. We sincerely hope that this article has been helpful to you in some way, and if you have any questions or comments, please don’t hesitate to reach out. And of course, don’t forget to visit us again soon for more articles on writing, publishing, and all things bookish. Thank you for reading!

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How to write a cover letter for short fiction submissions

First and foremost, my experience with cover letters is based on a couple years of submitting stories to magazines and is limited to speculative fiction magazines and anthologies. My way isn’t the only way. Also, every magazine is different and if you take nothing else away from this: read the submission guidelines from top to bottom to see if they have any cover letter preferences. Again, please read submission guidelines. It will make everyone’s life easier and significantly improve your chances of getting that coveted acceptance letter. Okay, on to cover letters…

How to write a cover letter for short fiction submissions:

First, don’t overthink it. Cover letters don’t need to be creative or even particularly well-written. Most magazines openly admit they don’t care much about the content of your cover letter; after all, it’s your story they’re buying. Second, there are only FOUR components to 90% of cover letters: greeting, info about the story, your publication history, and closing.

1. Greeting

Some cover letter instructions mention headers with your name, address, email address, and phone number. That seems to be going out of fashion and a lot of magazines either explicitly or by omission do not want all of that personal information during the submissions process. (If your story is accepted, they might ask for it then.) For the greeting itself, I recommend looking up the editor’s name and addressing them specifically. DO NOT assume titles like Mr. or Mrs; just use their full name. If there is more than one editor-in-chief, you can put all of them. Some editors have a preference for how they’re addressed, so look for that in their submission guidelines. (Edit: These days, I often just put Dear [Magazine Name] editorial team. It’s simple, and I like that it covers all the staff who work hard on the magazine.)

2. Information about your story

Next up is the title of your story, the word count rounded to the nearest hundred, whether it’s a simultaneous submission (check the guidelines to see if they accept submissions still waiting on a response from another magazine), and whether it’s an original or a reprint.

3. Your publication history

If you haven’t had any stories published, don’t sweat it. You can omit this section or say something simple like, “My fiction has not previously been published.” A lot of magazines are excited about publishing new authors. If you have had your work published, you can list up to three or four places your fiction has been published. You can also mention if you have any relevant education, like an MFA, or associations you’re a member of, like SFWA .

A quick Best or Warmest regards or even the old classic, Sincerely, will do here.

Here’s an example of a cover letter:

Dear Keisha Mann and Mike Garcia, Please consider “Songs of Death” (5700 words). It has not previously been published. My short fiction has appeared or is forthcoming in FIYAH, Diabolical Plots, and Anathema: Spec from the Margins. I appreciate your time and consideration. Best regards, Kel Coleman

Sometimes editors will ask for additional information, like your email address, background information that can provide context on your story, pronouns, or demographics with which you identify. This is especially true if the submissions call is limited to a specific demographic or they’re looking to offset reader bias by taking into account, upfront, any experiences the author has that the slush readers (often the first people who read and comment on your submission) and editors may not. A cover letter with some of those additional components may look like this:

Dear Made-up Magazine editorial team, Please consider “Songs of Death” (5700 words). This is a simultaneous submission and I will notify you immediately if it is accepted elsewhere. I am a member of SFWA and my short fiction has appeared in FIYAH, Anathema: Spec from the Margins, and other fine publications.

I am Black and queer. I appreciate your time and consideration. Best regards, Kel Coleman (they/them)

And that’s basically how you write a cover letter. Seriously, don’t overthink it or spend an inordinate amount of time on it.

How to query a short fiction magazine or anthology after you’ve submitted a story:

Has it been a million years since you submitted your story (aka a few months)? Is it past the estimated response time stated in the guidelines or perhaps the publisher posted on Twitter saying they’ve cleared all of their submissions? Then it’s time to query!

If you’re like me, you feel awkward about this, but you shouldn’t. As long as you’ve waited for the estimated response time to pass and you are polite, no reasonable magazine will mind a check in.

Example of a query letter:

Hello, I wanted to inquire about the status of my submission of “Songs of Death”, submitted on June 1st, 2021. Thank you for your time. Best, Kel

Simple as that. Editors are busy busy people and I don’t think you can ever go wrong just getting to the point, as long as you are polite about it. I don’t know if this is the “right” way to query, but I searched online for the proper way to no avail. I finally asked an experienced author I knew and used some of what they suggested to craft my letter.

Hope you found this post helpful! Happy submitting!

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How to Write Cover Letters for Short Stories

Writing a cover letter to submit with your short story to magazines or ezines is different from writing a query letter for a full length novel, but some rules do apply to both.

In the cover letter you don’t want to boast about yourself or your writing. If you make it seem like you think you’re “the next best thing,” editors will assume you’re a cocky newbie. And editors don’t want to work with cocky newbies. ;)

Don’t say:

  • “Everyone who’s read this story loves it.”
  • “I’m the next (insert famous author).”
  • “My story is so much better than everything else out there.”

On the opposite side of things, you don’t want to bash yourself or come across as having low confidence. If they see low confidence in you, it will influence them to have low confidence in your writing.

  • “I’ve never been published before.”
  • “I’ve been rejected by xx publishers before.”
  • “I know this story could use some work, but that’s what you’re for, right?”

You also don’t want to overload them with personal information. They’re not interviewing you right now, they’re looking at your story.

  • “I’ve been writing since…”
  • “I’m xx years old.”
  • “I work as a…” (unless your profession is related to the story you wrote and your inside knowledge makes it stronger.)

You want to address the cover letter by name if you can. Go to the website of the magazine or ezine you are submitting to and see if they have a list of who works in what position.

If you can’t figure out who exactly you’re submitting to, you can always just address your letter “Dear Editor” or “Dear Editors.”

Short stories are short. It doesn’t take long to read them, and it won’t take long for an editor to know all they need to about it. So unlike a full length novel’s query letter there’s usually no need for a synopsis or “back cover copy.” Unless it’s specifically requested in their submission guidelines.

All of this comes down to keeping your cover letting very brief. Most of the time there’s no need for it to be any more than 50 to 60 words long .

Because of this, cover letters for short stories often seem emotionless. They’re just the bare facts that an editor needs.

Finally, you always want to make sure you follow each magazine’s submission guidelines exactly.

We writers may not like to hear it, but if you were an acquisitions editor going through dozens or hundreds of submissions looking for the few you would choose, and you saw one that didn’t follow your specific guidelines, you would assume that since the writer didn’t care enough to check your guidelines before submitting, they wouldn’t care enough to write a good story or even edit it before they sent it to you.

And honestly, for acquisitions editors that’s a very good reason to reject a short story before even reading it.

Now on to some formats!

For a general cover letter, if you don’t see specific guidelines on their website, you can format it similar to this:

(Your Name)

(Email Address)

(Telephone Number)

Dear Editor,

Please consider my X,XXX word short story titled (story title) for (magazine name). The story is attached as a word document titled (document title).

Thank you for your time and consideration.

(your name)

Make sure you check their guidelines to see if they want the story sent as an attachment or in the body of the email, and modify your cover letter accordingly!

But sometimes submission guidelines are different from this format.

Here are two examples from short stories that I wrote and submitted to magazines (both were acquired, so they worked!).

For this magazine they wanted your personal contact information in the story’s separate document. In the cover letter they wanted:

Your first and last name, and your pen name if you wrote under one.

Your author website if you had one.

The name of the attached file that contained your story.

This was my cover letter:

My name is Jordan (last name), but I write under the pen name Just B. Jordan.

Attachment: (last name)—Howl

Author website: www.JustBJordan.com

I enjoy reading Splickety’s magazines and am hopeful that you’ll find “Howl” to be a good fit.

As you can see that was very short and to the point, no access information. It was 51 words long.

This second example is very similar to the one above, but this issue had a theme of literary re-imaginings. They wanted classic stories reinvented with a magical twist.

My cover letter:

The attached file is named (last name)—Covet, and the original classic story is Robin Hood.

And that’s it! Cover or query letters for short stories are very…short. ;)

Stick to the point and the information they require, omit anything else, and you’ll be good to go!

Good luck on submitting those short stories!

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The Proven Method Of Writing Short Story Cover Letters

Welcome to this guide on how to write a cover letter for a short story, as well as for pieces for magazines, journals, publishers and presses , complete with examples that have been proven to work in the past. 

The task of writing a cover letter can sometimes feel tougher than writing the actual story. Luckily, guidance is plentiful and having studied that guidance, I’ve put together a quick guide complete with examples.

At this early stage, it’s important to highlight that cover letters differ depending on whether it’s a short story, or a longer piece, such as a novel—submission requirements are more substantial for the latter.

For short stories, the best guidance I’ve encountered comes from Alex Shvartsman, well-respected editor and writer of sci-fi and fantasy. Check out his guidance in full here

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Here are some of the highlights:

  • If you know the name of the editor, address the cover letter to them. For instance, ‘Dear Mr Gamgee’. If in doubt, just use ‘Dear Editors’.
  • Keep it simple. The editor is about to read your story, you don’t need to tell them the ins and outs of character and plot. Let them discover it themselves. And if you explain it badly, you may put them off reading it altogether.
  • If it’s not relevant, don’t include it. If you’ve got a law degree, nice work, but what has it got to do with the story? If your story is a legal drama, then that’s a different matter.
  • List some of your most notable publishing accomplishments. If you don’t have any, that’s fine! As Shvartsman says: “Every editor I know loves discovering new talent and loves being the first to publish someone, or first to publish someone in a pro venue. No one is going to hold a lack of past credits against you.”

A Proven Example Of How To Write A Cover Letter For A Short Story

So, the examples. This is a cover letter I used for a short story called Noodlin ’, published by Kzine in May 2019.

_______________

Richie Billing

12 Hobbiton Lane, The Shire, Middle Earth

T: 07458228888

E: [email protected]

W: https://richiebilling.com/

Dear Editors,

I attach for your consideration ‘Noodlin”, a fantasy story around 2,800 words in length.

My short fiction has featured in Aphelion Webzine, Alien Pub Magazine and Far Horizons, and non-fiction in Authors Publish Magazine.

I appreciate you taking the time to consider my submission.

All the very best,

If, for instance, I was sending this story to a few publishers (AKA a simultaneous submission), it’s wise to tell them you’re doing so. An example may look something like this:

I have submitted this story to other publishers. Should it be accepted elsewhere I will, of course, inform you without delay.

For the avoidance of doubt, the text should not be bold. I’ve merely done so for easier reference.

The address and other details are very much optional provided you include them all on the first page of your manuscript. A true letter would feature this information in such a style, or it could be justified to the right of the page. However, in this modern age your submission email usually comprises the cover letter and with that the format’s a bit different. With emails, I usually put all this info at the very end, after my signature.

How To Write A Cover Letter For A Novel

So that’s the practice for short stories, what about novels?

Publishers may ask for a short summary of the novel in the cover letter. How short depends on the publisher—they may ask for detail, they may ask for a mere sentence.

A standard accompaniment to the cover letter is a synopsis—what your story is about , i.e. the premise, the point of it; the characters, their emotional journey and the conflicts they face; the intended market, and; where it aligns in that market, for instance, comparing it to Lord of the Rings. The length is generally limited by publishers to one page. Invest a good amount of time in your synopsis. Make every word count. Read it aloud. Refine it until you can’t say it any better. The synopsis helps an editor form their impression of your story so try and make the best one you can .

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How to Submit a Short Story

Last Updated on September 27, 2020 by Nathaniel Tower

Getting your short story published is often more difficult than actually writing the story. Even with thousands of literary magazines accepting short stories for publication, you still have less than a 10% chance of getting your story published any time you submit.

Unless you know exactly how to submit a short story.

With a smart submission strategy , your chances of acceptance can double, triple, or even quadruple.

If you follow this formula for submitting your short story, you will be celebrating your publication sooner than you thought possible.

Step 1: Find the perfect publication to send your story

The top secret for getting your short story published isn’t to have the best short story idea ever. No, you need to find a publication that’s a perfect fit for whatever story you’ve written. After all, a terrible story submitted to the right venue has a better chance of publication than a great story sent to the wrong venue.

Here are some general tips for finding the perfect venue to submit your short story:

  • The right word count. If your story is too long or too short, they won’t publish it.
  • The right genre. Although many literary magazines claim they don’t prefer a specific genre, there are even more that do. If you send your science fiction short story to a publication that primarily publishes romantic thrillers, then you don’t stand much of a chance. For magazines that don’t have a clear genre, avoid sending pure genre fiction. For example, don’t send a horror story to The New Yorker. It’s not going to get published.
  • The right aesthetic. Every publication has a style. That doesn’t mean all of their stories read exactly the same. Rather, it means there are patterns in the types of stories they publish. This may sound difficult to figure out, but all you need to do is read a handful of previously published stories. If your story is nothing like the ones you read, then it’s probably not the right publication.

Those aren’t the only factors that go into finding the right publication for your short story, but they will get you 90% of the way there.

Now that you’ve found the perfect place to submit your short story, let’s go to the next step.

Step 2: Submit your story in the right format

Literary magazines are notoriously picky about the format of short story submissions . The wrong margins, font size, or spacing will land you immediately in the rejection pile.

Not every publication tells you exactly how to format a story. If they do, you need to follow their guidelines no matter how ridiculous they sound. If they don’t provide any formatting guidance, then your best bet is to use standard short story format .

Of course, formatting isn’t just about having the right margins and fonts. You also need to save it as the right file type (Word Doc, PDF, RTF, etc.) And you need to make sure you send it using the right method. Fortunately, many publications make it exceptionally easy to submit a short story by using Submittable. For those that don’t, you will likely either need to email your story or use an online form.

There are very few publications left that don’t accept electronic submissions. For those that don’t, you’ll need to print your story and buy some stamps.

If you are emailing your story, make sure you follow their guidelines regarding attachments. Some publications do not allow you to submit attachments, which can make formatting your story a nightmare. In these cases, just do your best to get the story to look readable in the body of your email.

Okay, now that you know how to format the short story for submission, let’s talk about one more thing before you send it out.

Step 3: Include a brief cover letter and author bio with your story submission

While not every publication requires a cover letter and author bio, it’s generally best practice to include one unless they specifically tell you not to send it.

When you submit a short story, you should keep your cover letter brief and to the point. Unlike a novel query, a short story cover letter is not typically a pitch. Instead, you are simply writing a greeting, a brief introduction to yourself and the story, and a closing. Here are the best things to include in the cover letter:

  • The name of the publication
  • The name of your story
  • An approximate word count
  • A brief reason why you are submitting, if applicable

For example, you might say:

Dear Editor (use a name here if you know it, but make sure you don’t assume the editor’s gender ):

Please consider “Name of Story” for publication in Name of Journal. I believe this short story of approximately XXXX words will be a great fit for your journal because of its whimsical tone that aligns with the stories you typically publish.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response.

And that’s pretty much all there is to it.

Don’t get carried away with the cover letter. A lot of editors don’t even read them until right before they reject or accept your story.

You also typically want to include an author bio with your submission. This can be pasted at the bottom of your cover letter. If you are submitting your short story through a submission manager like Submittable , there may be a separate field for your author bio. If the publication requests a specific word count for your bio, make sure you follow their guidelines. Otherwise, a standard author bio will usually suffice.

Step 4: Submit your short story and track your submission

Once you’ve picked your publication, formatted your story, and written your cover letter and author bio, now it’s time to hit send. But that’s not the end of your job.

You also need to make sure you track your short story submission. Using a simple submission tracker like this free one will make it easy for you to:

  • Know how many times you’ve submitted your story
  • Withdraw your story if it’s accepted elsewhere
  • Determine any patterns of rejection that might suggest you need to rewrite the story

It may seem like an extra chore to track all your short story submissions, but I promise it will save you time and headaches in the long run. If you don’t log all your story submissions, then it’s only a matter of time before you send a story to a publication that’s already rejected it or forget to withdraw a story when it was accepted elsewhere. These types of mistakes will make editors very upset !

Final thoughts on how to submit a short story

Submitting your short story may seem like a daunting task, but it doesn’t have to be. By using the tips above, you can quickly get your story into submission shape and reduce the likelihood of rejection.

I’ve submitted my short stories over 1,300 times and have had over 200 acceptances using the formula above. In my early days of writing and submitting stories, I followed the old mantra of: if you throw enough shit at the wall, some of it will stick. As you can probably guess, not much stuck. Once I fine-tuned my process, I saw a huge increase in acceptances and income from my short stories.

Once you’ve mastered the art of submitting your short story, your next step will be to sell your short stories . When you’re first starting out, you may try submitting your stories to publications that only pay with exposure, but eventually you’ll want to move up to the big leagues! Fortunately, the process of selling your short stories isn’t much different than submitting your stories to non-paying venues. It’s all about finding the right publication and sending your best story in the right format.

So that’s all there is to it. Now it’s time for you to go submit something!

Have additional thoughts, comments, or questions about submitting short stories? Post a comment below, and remember to share this post on all your favorite channels.

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What’s in a short story cover letter, writing cover letters for short story submissions is actually pretty easy.

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So you’ve started to submit short stories to literary markets , and some of them are asking you to include a (cue the ominous music) cover letter. What to do?

Well, that ominous music can be cut right off because cover letters for short stories are no big thing. They are nothing like the cover letters that accompany resumes for job applications, nor query letters that go out with a sample from your novel to agents. A short story cover letter is a few sentences, maybe as long as two (gasp) paragraphs, of a few succinct things to send out with your short story submissions.

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As with all submission processes to literary markets,… Always read the submission guidelines! If they want a cover letter and what they want in a cover letter is often spelled out right there. If they do not spell it out, there are some best practices you can follow, which we will get into below.

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Cover letters are a carryover from the hardcopy days. From the mailing stories into the literary magazines days. (And some literary magazines still only…

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When sending out submissions, what do I write in a cover letter?

A cover letter accompanying a submission to a journal or magazine can be short and simple. Indicate that you're submitting the work for consideration, but don't say much—if anything—about the work. In these kinds of submissions, you include the story, essay or poems along with the cover letter. So, let the creative work speak for itself. You might indicate why you chose to send this particular piece to this particular publication. This demonstrates your knowledge of the publication and your mindfulness in submitting. Also, include biographical information. Select a few relevant details that highlight your accomplishments. You might mention where you studied creative writing, where your creative work has been published or any awards or accolades you've received. If you have no credits, don't worry. While accolades certainly build confidence in your abilities, the real focus is in the writing itself. In fact, many journals are hungry to introduce a great new writer by publishing a debut story.

Don't forget to read writers' guidelines closely. Some journals have a strong preference as to how you address your submissions. If the guidelines do not stipulate this, look up the appropriate editor on the journal's masthead and direct your submission to that person.

Here's an example of how a cover letter accompanying an electronic submission might read for a writer with few credits:

Dear Ms. Reynolds, Submitted for your consideration is “The Misfits of Greenwood," a short story. HaHa Magazine is a publication that values humor, an element I hope you enjoy in this story. I have studied creative writing as an undergraduate at Fancy University and at Continuing Education Workshop, where my fiction won the New Writer's Award. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, Holly Writer

I kept this one very short and simple. You can, of course, include more. Still, don't feel compelled to write something lengthy. The bulk of the attention will—and should—rest on the creative work that accompanies the cover letter. Some editors will use cover letters to decide what gets read faster, but there's no way to anticipate how each editor approaches this. One editor might give special attention to submissions that list previous publications in certain journals. Another editor might also take a quicker look at submissions that come from writers who went to her own beloved alma mater.

Be honest and keep the tone professional and friendly. This suggests respect—for your own writing and the work and time of the editors.

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Submitting Your Short Story: Writing A Cover Letter

When submitting short stories, you don't send a query—you write a cover letter.

One key difference between a query and a cover letter is the length. In a cover letter, you keep things short 'n sweet. To me, this is a blessing.

Since I'm in the process of submitting some short stories to various lit mags, I wanted to share tips I've learned about writing a solid cover letter:

The Do's and Do Not's of Cover Letter Writing

Do: Read the submission guidelines. Carefully . Editors will tell you what they want from you, and what they don't want.

Do Not: Include superfluous information, including a summary of your story (unless requested in the submission guidelines). You don't need to specify that you have followed the publisher's instructions; you should simply follow the instructions.

Do: Include a few of your relevant writing accomplishments, including awards, publishing credits, and professional writing association memberships.

Do Not: Worry if you don't have writing accomplishments or publishing credits. Everybody has to start somewhere. No good publication is going to hold it against you, and many publications welcome new and emerging writers.

Do : Specify if you are simultaneously submitting the piece to multiple publications. Again, check if the submission guidelines allow simultaneous submissions.

Do Not: Forget to proofread! This is your chance to look professional and make a good impression.

DEFINITELY Do: Check if the publication offers feedback upon request; if they do, request it! As new writers, feedback from publications is wildly important for us (even if it can be painful to read at times).

Okay! But What Should My Cover Letter Look Like?

Here's my current cover letter:

Dear Editor, For your consideration, please see "The Dead Will Dance," a microfiction under 250 words. This is a simultaneous submission. I would greatly appreciate feedback. Bio Jennifer Peaslee is an emerging dark fiction writer with an affinity for fairy tales and folklore. She lives in Atlanta with her two cats, and runs bleedingtypewriter.page , a community for new and emerging writers. Thank you for your time, Jennifer

And that's that! Title your email (usually "Submission," but again, check the guidelines ) and hit send—congrats—all that's left is to wait.

And wait...and wait...

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A cover letter is your chance to create a positive first impression for the editors and readers who are reviewing your work. An unprofessional (or even a long-winded) cover letter can warrant unenthusiastic consideration of your work.

However, a concise and well-written cover letter encourages editors to begin reading the submitted poem, manuscript, or short story proper. As Michelle Richmond, publisher of Fiction Attic Press, writes , “It might surprise you to know that the most forgettable cover letters are often the best.” And if you’re submitting to Adroit , it might be a good idea to review our cover letter guidelines here .

Here’s an example of an efficient and entirely fictitious cover letter that works, with footnotes to explain what to incorporate into your cover letters. A caveat: Different publications may have different requirements for their cover letters. Don’t assume that our template will work everywhere. That being said, this is a solid starting point.

Dear Peter LaBerge, Chris Crowder, Heidi Seaborn, and Adroit readers, 1

Please consider my poem, “No Regrets.” 2 I’ve been a long-time fan of Adroit , and I particularly enjoyed Jennifer Tseng’s “ First Son ” from Issue 27. 3

This is a simultaneous submission. If “No Regrets” is accepted elsewhere, I will withdraw it immediately. 4

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. 5

Sincerely, Peter Rabbit

Peter Rabbit is a senior majoring in statistics and comparative literature at the University of Vermont. Their work has previously been published in Winter Tangerine and Vagabond City . Some of their other work can be found online at peterrabbit.wordpress.com. 6

1 Referencing editors’ names shows that you’ve done your research and adds a personal touch to what may be a copy-and-pasted cover letter. For your convenience, I’ve linked the Adroit masthead here . If you truly can’t find information about the editor, consider using “Dear Editors,” “Dear Readers,” “To whom it may concern:” or “Dear [Journal].”

2 Short and simple. Your first sentence should convey why you are writing this cover letter. If you’re submitting a short story, editors will often want to know the word count. Also include the category or genre of the piece.

3 Referencing a piece or two previously published by a literary journal shows editors that you’ve done your research. Editors can assume that you’re familiar with what kind of work they publish, and that will set their mind at ease. Of course, don’t fake it. If you have a truly personal connection with the editor, feel free to add it. But make sure it’s not as inane as “I noticed that we both have a dog! I love dogs.”

4 Simultaneous submissions are submitted to multiple journals at the same time. It’s a common practice accepted at many journals, but individual journals might have different requirements. Always include information on simultaneous submissions as a matter of professional courtesy.

5 Simple, courteous, and a good lead to the actual content.

6 Many journals, like Adroit , will ask for a short bio. Include some general details about your current occupation, your training or education, and some of your most recent publications. It’s important to emphasize that editors will keep reading even if you haven’t had any publications or if you aren’t formally pursuing a creative writing degree (whether graduate or undergraduate), so don’t feel like you’ve got to conjure up some accolades or fluff. You probably want to leave out superfluous details like your job as a babysitter in sixth grade or your last sandwich order.

There you have it. A quick but professional way to open your submission to a literary journal, magazine, and publication. You seem human, but you are first and foremost a writer. And writers want their work to be read and published. Good luck!

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These are some guidelines for writing a cover letter. For information about what kinds of stories we're looking for, see our fiction guidelines .

  • Address it to "Editors".
  • List up to three previous publication credits if you have them. It's okay if you don't have any.
  • Mention experience you have that is directly relevant to the story (we'd particularly like to know if you are writing about your own culture or profession, for instance).
  • Address it to "Sirs" or use titles like Mr./Ms./Mrs./Miss.
  • Summarize or pitch your story, or include praise for your work.
  • Include information about you that isn't relevant to the story.

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Cover letters should be brief and simple. Here are a few examples of good cover letters. Feel free to use any of them as a template for your own letter.

Very Basic Cover Letter:

Dear Editors,

Please consider the following story for Strange Horizons . Thank you.

Sincerely, A. I. Robotsky

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Please consider the following story for Strange Horizons .

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This article provides a guide on how to write a cover letter for submitting a short story. A cover letter is a formal document that accompanies your short story submission to literary magazines, publishers, or writing contests. It serves as an introduction to your work and gives a glimpse into your writing style and the story you are submitting. Writing a well-crafted cover letter can increase your chances of getting your short story accepted for publication.

In this article, you will find examples of cover letters for submitting a short story, as well as suggestions on what to include in your letter to make it stand out. By following these guidelines, you can create a compelling cover letter that grabs the attention of editors and increases your chances of success.

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Letter example 2:, suggestions for writing a cover letter, conclusions, faq: how long should a cover letter for submitting a short story be, faq: should i mention any previous publications or writing credentials in my cover letter, faq: can i submit the same short story to multiple publications at the same time, faq: should i include my contact information in the cover letter, examples of cover letters for submitting a short story.

Dear [Editor's Name],

I am writing to submit my short story, titled "[Title of Your Short Story]," for consideration in [Name of Literary Magazine]. I have been an avid reader of your publication for many years and admire the high-quality fiction you showcase.

[Briefly introduce your story and highlight its unique elements or themes.]

Thank you for considering my submission. I look forward to the opportunity to contribute to the esteemed collection of stories in [Name of Literary Magazine].

Sincerely, [Your Name]

I am excited to submit my short story, "[Title of Your Short Story]," to [Name of Publisher], in response to your call for submissions for the upcoming anthology on [Theme of Anthology].

[Provide a brief synopsis of your story and explain why it is a good fit for the anthology.]

Thank you for considering my submission. I appreciate the opportunity to contribute to the diverse range of voices in [Name of Publisher]'s anthologies.

Best regards, [Your Name]

When writing a cover letter for submitting a short story, consider the following suggestions to make it more effective:

  • Address the letter to a specific editor or publication.
  • Introduce your story and highlight its unique elements or themes.
  • Explain why you think your story is a good fit for the publication/anthology.
  • Express your gratitude for the opportunity to submit your work.

Writing a compelling cover letter is an essential part of submitting a short story. It allows you to introduce yourself and your work to editors and provides them with a glimpse of your writing style and the story you are submitting. By following the examples and suggestions provided in this article, you can create a strong cover letter that increases your chances of getting your short story accepted for publication.

A cover letter for submitting a short story should be concise and to the point. Aim for one page or less.

If you have any relevant writing credentials or previous publications, it can be beneficial to mention them briefly in your cover letter. However, if you are a new writer without any previous publications, it is not necessary to mention this.

Many publications accept simultaneous submissions, but make sure to check each publication's guidelines before submitting your story. If a publication does not allow simultaneous submissions, wait until you receive a response before submitting your story elsewhere.

It is not necessary to include your contact information in the cover letter since most submissions are done electronically. However, make sure to include your name and email address in the submission form or cover letter header.

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Short Story Submissions: How to Publish a Short Story or Poem

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After a tornado of critiques and revisions, you’ve got a story or poem that you’re ready to share with the world. Now what do you do?

Navigating the world of submissions and getting to the emerald city of publication can be daunting. Let this article be your yellow brick road to literary success.

Use Submission Grinder and other market research

First, you’ll need to decide where to submit your work. There are a number of resources that can help you. Duotrope tracks thousands of poetry, fiction, and non-fiction markets and operates on a paid subscription basis. It allows you to search by genre, length, pay scale, acceptance rate, and estimated response time. The Submission Grinder is a free database, similar to Duotrope, that currently tracks fiction markets only. Ralan lists speculative and humor publications. Poets & Writers maintains a searchable database of literary journals and contests. Other sources include The Review Review and Writer’s Market .

Understanding pay scales during the short story & poetry submission process

Pay scale is often divided into four categories: pro, semi-pro, token, and non-paying or “for the love.” Professional rates for short stories are $0.05 USD per word or higher (some organizations, such as Science Fiction Writers of America, use $0.06 per word as the minimum for pro rates). Semi-pro publications pay $0.01 per word or higher up to pro rates, while a token payment is less than $0.01 per word. For poetry, a payment of $50 per poem and higher is considered a professional rate. Less than $5 per poem is a token payment, while anything between $5 and $50 is semi-pro. Non-paying publications do not offer money, though they may offer contributor copies. These definitions are mainly used to determine membership requirements for different writing organizations. Higher-paying markets are generally more selective.

Many writers look at acceptance rates and response times and conclude that their best bet is to submit lots of pieces to lots of markets. Can you submit your story or poem to several different markets at once? Can you send several pieces at the same time? Well, it depends.

Simultaneous poetry or short story submissions

The first scenario—sending one piece to different markets at the same time—is called a simultaneous submission. Some markets allow you to do this, while others require that you give them exclusive consideration. The market’s guidelines will tell you their policy. If you decide to submit simultaneously, make sure all the markets to which you send the piece accept simultaneous submissions. After your work is accepted at one place, you’ll need to withdraw it from all the other markets; that’s difficult to explain if those market don’t allow simultaneous submissions, and can lead you to get a negative reputation among editors. For this reason, it’s a good idea to divide markets into tiers according to preference. Submit first only to the ones where you’d most like to be published. After you’ve heard back from all of them, send the story or poem to the markets on the next tier.

Multiple Poetry or Short Story Submissions

The second scenario—sending several pieces at the same time to one magazine—is most commonly allowed for poetry and flash and is called a multiple submission. Read the guidelines carefully to find out how many pieces you can submit at once.

Keep in mind that many markets do not accept work that has already been published, and if they do, you must identify it as a reprint. Work posted publicly on a blog is considered published. To be safe, password-protect any work that you choose to post on a blog if you think you may submit it.

Potential Poetry or Short Story Submission Fees

Finally, some markets charge submission fees, often two or three dollars per submission. Contests may charge more. Although you always want to be careful when paying for submission services, a fee is not an automatic sign of a scam. Many legitimate markets charge them to pay for their submission manager or the cost of printing submissions, and often allow you to send your work by mail without paying a fee. However, there are also numerous markets at all pay scales and prestige levels that do not charge fees. It’s possible to make lots of submissions without ever paying to do so. If you’re not sure whether or not a fee is worth it, it’s a good idea to research the market further and ask other writers for advice.

Formatting your short story or poetry submission

When you read submission guidelines, you’ll find that many markets require you to submit in Standard Manuscript Format. If you’re not familiar with this, you’re in luck: this Academy article explains what to do.

Standard Manuscript Format is common, but not universal. This is one reason it’s important to check the guidelines. Some markets want you to remove your name and contact information from the work (don’t forget the header!), so they can judge submissions blindly. Some want you to save your attachment in .rtf or .txt or to paste it in the body of an email rather than attaching it. Some may ask you to insert the phrase “Van Halen hates brown M&Ms” just to prove you’ve read the guidelines.

So what’s a writer to do? That’s right—read the guidelines.

If you need to attach the document, put your last name and the work’s title in the file name (or the title only if it’s a blind submission). Editors get dozens of attachments titled some variation of “Magazine Submission.” Make your work easy to find.

Writing your poetry or short story cover letter

The only information you need to include in your cover letter is the title and category of your submission, approximate word count or line count, and your name. Keep it polite, professional, and to the point. Here’s an example:

Dear Literary Genius Quarterly Editors, I am submitting my short story, “The Telltale Abbey,” for your consideration. It is approximately 3200 words long. Thank you for your time. Sincerely, Jane Poe

If you know the name of the editor, you can address it to them. If the work is a reprint, identify it as such. Some magazines also ask you to note if the work is a simultaneous submission. If you’re submitting by email, use a clear subject line like “Submission: [Title] by [Author]” (or whatever the guidelines specify).

You can also add a line listing previous publication credits. If you do this, limit yourself to the top three. Don’t worry if you don’t have any previous credits—many magazines are happy to discover new writers.

Logging and Tracking your short story or poetry submission

Once you’ve sent your work off to see the publishing wizard, make sure to record the title, market name, and date that you submitted. Duotrope and The Submission Grinder both allow you to record this information online, as well as to see how long other writers’ submissions have been pending. A simple spreadsheet works too. This information will help you stay organized, and, if you need to, query.

With short stories and poetry, a query is a request for information on a pending submission. A market’s submission guidelines often tell you how long you should wait before querying. Markets that use Submittable let you check your status. Otherwise, see how long responses usually take on Duotrope or The Submission Grinder. If your submission is far past what’s been reported, it may be time to write a message explaining what you submitted and when, and asking if they received it and have any information for you. Keep it short and sweet.

After you’ve logged your submission information, try to put it out of mind. A great way to stop obsessing? Write, so you have more work to submit.

Getting a rejection

We’ll start with rejections, because those are most common, even if you’re the great literary hope of your generation. All writers get rejected, even the masters . This article alludes to The Wizard of Oz ; L. Frank Baum, its author, collected his rejections in a “Record of Failure.” Though it may feel like failure, think of it as progress toward publication. It’s not enjoyable, but it does get easier with time.

Here’s what you should not do if you get a rejection. First, don’t respond to the magazine, not even to say thanks. They’re busy enough with new submissions, and continuing correspondence will only take up their time. Never, ever respond to explain your story or complain about the decision. It won’t change their mind on this submission, and it might lead them to automatically reject your next one. Even if you never submit there again, don’t send an angry response. Editors talk.

If the editor includes specific comments about your story or poem (think “Jack was an intriguing character,” not “I enjoyed reading this”), that’s a personal rejection. It may include advice about how to improve your story or poem. As with advice on Scribophile, consider it, but don’t feel bound to follow it if you disagree. Another editor might like your work exactly as it is.

Second, don’t let a rejection lead you to believe that your work is bad. Rejections happen for lots of reasons. Maybe your steampunk squid romance was too similar to an already accepted piece. Maybe you sent them a great epic poem, but they only have space left for a haiku. Maybe they really did like it, just not enough. So send it out again, quick. There’s probably someone out there who will love it.

Getting an acceptance

Congratulations! Your work has been accepted! After dancing for joy, what should you do?

Let the editor know that you’ve received the acceptance and send them any information they may have requested, such as an author bio. If the publication pays its contributors, they’ll probably send you a contract. Read this carefully before you sign. Make note of what rights you’re selling. The contract should specify how long the publication has exclusive rights and where (print, online, geography/language) as well as any non-exclusive, archiving rights. Once the exclusive rights have expired, you will be free to submit the piece as a reprint or to self-publish it. Return the signed contract, making sure to save a copy.

Withdraw any pending simultaneous submissions. Share the news. And celebrate! There’s nothing like finding your work a home.

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What should be in a cover letter for short story submission to a magazine?

It's been about five years since I last submitted any of my work for publication, and my memory of what I was taught then to put in my cover letter is getting rusty.

What kind of information should I provide when sending a short story to a small literary magazine?

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It depends on the magazine. Many publications have submission guidelines, and you might check those for what anything required in the cover letter. I found an interesting variety of requests with a few minutes of googling.

Asimov's Science-Fiction is clear on what they want:

Your cover letter should contain the length of your story, your publishing history and any other relevant information (e.g., if you send us a story about a medical disaster and you happen to be an emergency room nurse, mention that.).

The Briar Cliff Review is a little vaguer:

Please send a cover letter and short biographical note with all submissions.

McSweeny's is nearly as vague, but more interesting:

Please keep [your cover letter] brief, though we do like to hear from people who read and like the magazine. We're not concerned about writing degrees or past publications, though, so don't be daunted if you don't have an MFA or much in the way of previously published work.

In short, make certain to read the submission guidelines. (Online and print requirements may differ, even within the same publication.) A manuscript in the wrong format is not going to be read quickly, if at all. I don't know if the tone of the cover letter matters or not, although if I were submitting to McSweeny's I'd spend more time on that letter.

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Two tips for submissions (no matter how short the story is):

  • Write just a letter/email and ask for permission to send them your story.
  • In this letter (like in every cover letter) you should describe your story and yourself shortly and you should put in there, why they should publish your story. Why is it fantastic? Why do people really want to read it? What's different from all these other boring 50 submissions they got?

Yeah, I know, the second one is harder than the first ...

Edit: To be more specific about describing your story :

It's not about: "It's a crime story about incest." It's about: "It's about a woman killing her ex-husband to conceal that she has married her own son."

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  • 1 Note that some markets (particularly short fiction) explicitly request in their submission guidelines that you not describe the story. –  Ash Commented Dec 7, 2010 at 11:06
  • @Ash: Really? What's that good for? If your short stories only has two or three pages, I could understand it. For longer stories they skip an opportunity to filter the submissions. –  John Smithers Commented Dec 7, 2010 at 13:06
  • 3 I don't know about other genres, but in Sci-fi/Fantasy, it seems like most publications only want queries on novellas or serials, and the entire manuscript for anything shorter. –  sjohnston Commented Dec 7, 2010 at 15:47

For magazine writing, it's not so much a "cover letter" you're sending but more of a pitch . This is important because you're not introducing yourself (even though you need to convince the editor that you're THE person to go with for the story), you're trying to sell the story. Hook the editor. Make the person so curious and unsatisfied they s/he must contact you to find out more.

Most magazine editors have told me they see your pitch as a writing sample - can I trust this person to execute?

Give them the gist of the story in the first 2-3 paragraphs. Then answer the question, "why should I care?"

Add what else is in your story (if you have already finished writing it, I'm not sure whether you should say this or not. Some editors say they don't mind. Others have told me they prefer an unfinished piece because editors love to dig their fingers in and shape the piece). Wrap up with your credentials (like a website where they can find your clips). This doesn't necessarily mean your degrees or awards. But something like "I'm a science writer who has covered X and Y and has published in A and B." Then why you should care/hire me. And that's it. Shorter is better, but use as many words as you need to nail it.

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Having read hundreds of short stories (and cover letters) over the past few months, I'm always startled by the broad variances in what people believe is necessary in the cover letter for a short story. I have seen people worry about the contents of their cover letters as reasons their story was rejected, and the reality is that that's an unlikely event. That said, a short, sweet, polished cover letter will help your editors when they need relevant information about your story.

Part of the problem is that writing advice all over the internet is sometimes truly unclear. Of the mistakes and missteps I see, most common are the ones that mistakenly use the instructions for a novel query letter in the cover letter for a short story. Novel queries are a little outside the purview of this newsletter, but suffice it to say that these two types of letters are very different and require different types of information.

The cover letter for a short story can almost always be as short and simple as possible.

Most publishers will need:
- title and word count for your short story.
- any relevant information or credentials you may have--these are completely optional and only recommended if there's a direct link; eg, you work in robotics and your story is about robots. You do not need to include any education credentials unless they are relevant, either. If the first reader is interested in your story, your lack of credentials here will not harm your chances, so I would include only as needed.
- If you have attended a relevant workshop, you may include that, and if you have recent relevant publications, you may list up to three of these.
- your name and contact information.

Read the submission guidelines for every publication you submit to! Follow any additional instructions they advise; for example, if they request you to include the subgenre of your story as well as the title.

If you do not know or are not sure of the name or salutation of the editor or editors for the publication, even after reading the guidelines, my suggestion is to use "Dear Editor" or "Dear Editors" instead of potentially naming the wrong person or misgendering them.

Here is a good framework I like to use for my own submissions. I've placed all of the components in brackets so you can easily see the way to use them for your own cover letters.

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Thank you for your time and attention!

Sincerely,
Your Name
[contact info--email address is best]

And that's all you need!

Unless the publication requires it, I would strongly recommend you NOT include any summary information about the story as it's not required and usually just adds unnecessary bulk to the cover letter.

I know I've already harped on it, but I can't stress enough to look at the guidelines for the specific magazine you want to send your story to, and follow their instructions as well as any of the above that apply to your submission. "Didn't read the guidelines" is not the impression you want to give the editor!

Let me know if you have any questions about this process - - it can be really daunting to send out your work for publication!

Until next time,
Take care and Write on!
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Short Story Cover Letters

By Neil Clarke

On 08/17/2020

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Let me preface this post by saying:

  • These are my preferences for cover letters when submitting a story to Clarkesworld Magazine or one of my anthologies. This is not a standard, though other editors may feel the same way.
  • Most cover letters are awful, so I read them last. I don’t want them influencing my opinion of a story before I’ve even read it. I’ve never rejected a story because of the cover letter.
  • This post will be updated as necessary. Please feel free to ask questions in the comments.

How to address a cover letter

You can skip Dear Neil, Dear Mr. Clarke, Dear Editor, Dear Editor and first readers, etc. It doesn’t have any impact. Simple mistakes here can sometimes work against you. For example, “Dear Sheila” tells me you either meant to send this to Asimov’s or they’ve already rejected it. Every editor I know has had this sort of thing happen to them. Some hate it. Some find it amusing. I couldn’t care less, so just skip the niceties and dive right into the substance.

What should be in a cover letter?

There’s a few things that might have me view your story in a different light.

  • if there’s a particular aspect to this story that pulls from your professional experience (for example, physicist, historian, astronaut, musician, etc.) or personal experience (cultural, regional, temporal, etc.)

You don’t have to “write what you know” but if you happen to know, it’s good that I know you do.

  • if you are a non-native English speaker

I have immense difficulty learning other languages, so I’m not going to hold a non-native speaker to the same standards for spelling and grammar. Your approach to storytelling might even be a bit non-standard to a native English speaker. This is important to know for the evaluation and (if accepted) editing phases.

  • if you are under 18 years old

I’m impressed. I never would have done something like this at your age. Like the non-native speakers, I’m going to cut you a little more slack on the grammar and spelling. (Not that I’m particularly hung up on that being perfect to start with.) It does, however, have an impact should we choose to accept your work: your parents or legal guardian will be required to co-sign the contract.

Since I read the cover letter last, think of the above items as having the potential to make me go back and read a bit further. This even applies in instances where I haven’t been the first reader. (Editors and first readers often stop reading a story when they no longer think it will work for a publication.)

  • if you are previously unpublished

I’m not buying names. I’m buying stories. What you’ve sold previously (or not) doesn’t mean this story will be any better or worse. That said, every editor I know loves to be the first person to publish an author’s work. It’s something that should be celebrated and I often don’t find out until after the story has been published. Telling me up-front helps avoid that.

  • if you are submitting a translation

You should tell me where the story was originally published (if it has been), what the original language is, your relationship to the story (author or translator), and whether or not you have the approval of whoever holds the rights on the original (sometimes this isn’t the author or their estate). The translator’s name should also be in the manuscript, typically under the author’s byline.

  • if you are submitting a reprint

We don’t accept reprints at Clarkesworld , but this does apply to any of the reprint anthologies I edit. I need to know where and when the story was originally published and if there are any restrictions (usually time, region, or language-based) in place.

  • if you aren’t the author

Yes, there are legitimate reasons this could happen. The most common is that the person submitting the work is the author’s agent or otherwise represents their estate. It also common with translations. We will verify this before issuing a contract.

  • if you selected “other” for genre

Since it doesn’t fit in one of the categories we’ve listed, please let us know what genre you think it is.

If none of the above applies to you, then a simple “Thank you for considering my story” is more than enough.

What shouldn’t be in a cover letter?

  • Our submission system already asks for title, genre, word count, and email address. Repeating them here is pointless
  • Mailing address (should be on the first page of the story) or phone number
  • A laundry list of everyone that has ever published you. Never include more than three, but honestly, you should just skip this information entirely
  • Bank or PayPal information
  • A summary of your story

Ultimately, I prefer your cover letter to be very short. If your cover letter is long (for reasons other than those positives I’ve mentioned), you’ve likely done something wrong.

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Carolyn O'Brien

Very helpful information,

cover letter for submitting short story

Angela Panayotopulos

Good to know! Thanks!

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Des Browning

“We don’t accept reprints at Clarkesworld, but this does to any of the reprint anthologies I edit”

This doesn’t read correctly, specifically “this does”. Should it be “this doesn’t apply” ?

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Neil Clarke

Should have been “this does apply”

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Oyeledun Jehofanifemi

About the Co_signing of the contract, how is it going to be possible with international writers

We work with international writers all the time and have never had any problem with receiving digital signatures on their contracts. Sometimes they sign through the PDF and sometimes they print, sign, and send us a scan or photo of the contract.

cover letter for submitting short story

Hello, If I am writing with 8 other writers, and we would like to explain how this story came to be, would you like us to include that in the cover letter?

If you must, please keep it short. While it may be interesting, it isn’t relevant to the evaluation process.

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Gim Patrick

Hello, I’m 15 years old right now and I’m from San Andres Island, Colombia. My mom already knows I want to start with this and supports me. ¿Do I still need a co-sign?

You can submit stories without needing any signatures, but if we accept one for publication, a parent or legal guardian will need to co-sign the contract we send you. This is a legal requirement for us when working with minors (anyone under 18).

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Simon Kibunyi

Hey what if I rewrite a story that was written centuries ago,put my own twist into it. It’s important to also say that these stories are royalty free meaning I can do anything I want to do with them..do you accept them?

Retellings/reinterpretations of public domain works (stories, myths, legends, etc.) are quite common and we have published some. I would recommend mentioning the work that inspired yours in the cover letter.

Wow thanks for quick response…I will definitely do that..Thank you

cover letter for submitting short story

Is there a way we can retain audio rights? It doesn’t say anything about having a podcast, so if I would like to submit the short story to another podcast, would that be possible?

And I was wondering about reprints. I know that most podcasts accept them, but I was wondering if it worked the other way around. If my short gets accepted for a podcast, but has not been published yet (in text form), can I still send it out to magazines after it’s in audio and published?

Clarkesworld requires audio rights. (We podcast all the stories that appear in our magazine.) If a story has been previously published by a podcast, it would no longer have the first rights we also require.

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Can we still publish our own version after you publish the audio, or can we use your version? Would it be ok to use pointers on our website? Once I get one, that is.

We have exclusive rights to published works for six months from date of publication. After that you may reprint or publish the story elsewhere. The audio edition cannot be repurposed as that version of the narration is ours. You can, however, create a new recording of your own. You are also allowed to link to the published versions on our website.

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Issac Strom

Would it be possible for you to offer an example of what you consider to be an exemplary cover letter?

I would be extremely appreciative. In any case, thank you very much for your time in writing out this useful advice.

Not including one was a deliberate move on my part. The above criteria can result in a variety of “exemplary” (by my standards) cover letters and providing an example of just one might mislead someone who needed another.

That said, merely “good” is good enough. If everyone followed the guidance of the last paragraph of this post, that would be a great start.

cover letter for submitting short story

I would like to say, thank you very much for taking the time to make these guidelines crystal clear and easy to understand.. I look forward to submitting my work soon.

Thank you. I look forward to reading your stories.

I have a quick question, I know it might sound silly but I think it’s better to ask and be corrected than to make the mistake anyways. The short story that I have written is up to 20,000 words, I’m wondering if I could include chapters in it or it’s forbidden to do so.

Do what you think is appropriate for the story. Something that small won’t alter our evaluation of it. If we accept it and think it isn’t quite right, we’d discuss it with you during the editing phase.

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Nithiya Shree

Hello Neil Clarke Sir. I want to introduce myself to you because I got very much inspiration from you. When I searching to Chakesworld for submission I saw ” Award Winning Editor” this impress me Soo much.

I’m Nithiya Shree from Myanmar ( Burmese). I’m 18. I’m finished my high school when I’m 16 and now I’m trying to be an author. As above you mentioned sir, I’m not English native speaker. I have only English intermediate level. But sir I will try my best to submit my story to your team. Also I’m not previously published. Again I’m not an author now. Even though I’m none of them, Can I able to become an author Sir ?

Now Sir I’m starting my plot. One day I will be as you.

This comment may br disturb to you, I’m sorry for that. As you said, I’m freely to comment. I hope it will not agitate you.

Hi Nithiya, You don’t need to be a published author (in English or any other language) to submit stories to Clarkesworld. We are happy to see works by new writers from all over the world. I wish you the best of luck with your writing and hope to see submissions from you over at Clarkesworld someday.

Nithiya shree

Thank you so much Sir.

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Evonne M. Biggins

Hello, Clark,

I appreciate that you take questions. A couple years ago, I sent three stories to the non-profit state writing league. They were printed in a book with many other members’ stories, but whoever printed/edited them scrambled sentences, changed dates and locations, didn’t indent paragraphs. We were all very upset. Mine were my favorite stories. We weren’t paid for them, but the league made money from them. The league recently folded, no longer exists. So, are those stories considered previously published and not publishable or can we change the stories and the titles and be able to submit them?

Thank you, Evonne M. Biggins.

Published badly is still published. Even corrected, you won’t be able to sell them as originals anymore. They’ll be reprints from here on out. Changes would need to be substantial before someone would consider them as a new story. Changing names, formatting, and correcting errors doesn’t achieve that. Not surprised that the league folded if that’s how they treated the writers they worked with.

OMG. I meant to start with the correct spelling of your first and second name.

A lesson was learned on my part, sorry!

🙂 No worries. Happens all the time.

Hi Neil Clarke 🙂 ,

I expected that reply, and thanks again. I agree; those stories meant a lot to us, and the “leaders” of our chapter failed us. I’ll think up an even better story to send to you.

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Hi, I was just wondering, do you consider stories with long, descriptive and slightly philosophical sections, or do you prefer fast- moving and plot based work? Thank you, Catrina

I don’t see it as an either/or situation. Happy to consider both approaches.

Thank you for the quick reply.

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Ayesha javed

Hello Clark , I just turned 18 and want to become a story writer. I want to publish a story that I have been working on for the last couple of months. I have never published before and don’t know much about it. The story that I have been working on is in volumes and each volume has roughly 5000 words. I don”t have anyone to guide me so can you please tell me if I can publish my story in volumes

Short stories are usually submitted and considered by publishers individually. Even if we were to accept the first one, each one after that would still be considered on its own individual merits. We would also expect each story to stand on its own, meaning that someone could read story #3 without having to have read #1 and #2. If each story is dependent on the prior installment, you may be serializing a novel (depending on many 5K installments you have). While there are some current magazines that have published serialized novels (I can think of two in recent years), we’re not one of them. That said, we have published some short stories that have eventually been expanded into novels and published elsewhere.

Thank You for the guidance.

cover letter for submitting short story

Evangeline Mmayie

Hello Clarke,

I have two questions concerning the type of story we are to submit. Should it be YA or adult SF/F?

Also, you stated you don’t want a story about rapists. But what if the rapist is the villain and the crime occurred long before the story begins?

cover letter for submitting short story

Doris Antonio Balica

Hello Neil,

Continuing on what Ayesha previously asked, but somewhat different, could stories be published separately—and at a later date from each-other— in, let’s say two volumes, if the second one is not an actual continuation of the first, nor a “prequel”? Instead, the plot of the second volume occurs at the same time and is simply seen from the perspective of other characters / civilization, barely named in the first volume, or not at all. The plot culminates in the same ending, there are some repeating scenes and dialogues, but a different point of view, the stories do stand on their own, as someone could read #2 without reading #1 and vice-versa. Could the second volume be accepted (providing the first one is)?

So two stories happening in the same world at the same time, but told from two different points-of-view? I remember reading a book, many years ago, that did that. The book was evenly split between the two points of view and you could read either half first.

It is possible that could work in short fiction, but the amount of repeated content could become problematic (since short fiction is paid per-word, the amount of recycled word-for-word content might become a red flag for an editor/publisher) and as you said, the story ends the same way, so something else would have to stand out to make up for the spoiled ending. The latter is the same problem a lot of retellings face.

I wouldn’t discount the possibility this could work, but I think it might be harder than selling two very different stories.

Thank you for the reply, my first plan was to blend them together in a single story, but it would’ve had too many main and side characters even for a novella. I’m looking forward to submitting the first story soon and see how it goes from there.

Also, you stated you don’t want a story about rapists. But what if the rapist is the villain and the crime occurred long before the story begins?

Our audience is primarily adults, but adults read both, so it doesn’t matter which.

I don’t have enough information to make that call. Submit the story. The worst that happens is we’ll say no.

Okay, thank you

cover letter for submitting short story

Robert Lewis

Can you withdraw after submission?

If one were to notice an error or a glut of errors would one be able to withdraw and submit a revision? A mark of the unprofessional, I know. Haven’t quit my day job yet.

Sure. If you contact us, we can remove the submission. You’ll have to resubmit and that will move you to the back of the queue. That said, if it’s just a few spelling errors, I wouldn’t worry about it. That’s not enough to sway our opinion.

cover letter for submitting short story

Greg Osadec

After reading the original post and the comments, it doesn’t seem like there’s anything for me to include in a cover letter.

Is it okay to write one that’s just a few sentences (such as these examples from Strange Horizons: http://strangehorizons.com/submit/fiction-submission-guidelines/how-to-write-a-cover-letter/ ) or skip it altogether?

If none of the above applies to you, then a simple “Thank you for considering my story” is more than enough.

Oh jeez, I just noticed this in the original post. I’m embarrassed that I missed it. Thanks for your patience!

Do you accept high fantasy with a sword and sorcery vibe?

cover letter for submitting short story

I need to write my details in the story, like an address, an account number, or do it in a cover letter.

Address is part of the standard first page information in the document containing your story and there is no need to replicate it in the cover letter. Account number is never necessary in a submission. That should only come up if a story is accepted for publication.

cover letter for submitting short story

Can I submit a story based on science fiction, martial arts and fantasy.

cover letter for submitting short story

Chris Wozney

I love the clarity and directness of these instructions. It’s quite clear that there are human beings (who are attempting to be judicious) on the receiving end of submissions, not a sorting algorithm.

cover letter for submitting short story

My husband has written an excellent story, but he doesn’t have any confidence that it could be published, so he’s reluctant to submit it anywhere. Could I submit it for him and then (one hopes) surprise him with an offer to publish if you choose it?

A story shouldn’t be submitted without the author’s permission, even with the best of intentions.

cover letter for submitting short story

Hi, can i write story with my native Malay language? I from Malaysia..thanks

cover letter for submitting short story

Yesss, this is super informative. If we want to use a pseudonym, though, would we leave that in the cover letter, or just use it as our name in the information?

It doesn’t need to be in the cover letter. It should be in the story attached to the submission. The standard header should include your legal name and contact information. Your pseudonym would go under the title.

Perfect, thanks!

cover letter for submitting short story

Hello Mr. Clarke,

Thank you for the clear guidelines! A lot of places it’s a shot in the dark. Stupid question: if I submit work to you folks and it is rejected, does this impact future submissions (assuming that the standard waiting period is observed etc.)?

I am trying to determine the fine line between persistence and being a nuisance.

Thanks in advance.

All the best, Vivian

Every submission is a clean slate. Previous rejections or acceptances have no bearing on how we consider the next one.

Thank you for clarifying!

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Patricia C.

For the coming spanish submission process, the cover letter should be in spanish or in english if that is possible?

The cover letter for stories submitted during the Spanish Language Submissions Window can be in English or Spanish. Whichever is more comfortable for you.

cover letter for submitting short story

What are the chances that I would be allowed to create the podcast (given the acceptance of my diatribe) myself. I have some experience of producing podcasts to a broadcast standard, and the equipment to do so.

We’d be open to discussing it, but if its a deal-breaker, we’d want to know that at time of submission.

Thank you Neil, it wouldn’t be a condition though..

cover letter for submitting short story

Thanks so much for supplying this page (and all the other informative pieces you’ve written) to help us burgeoning writers. I was nervous about what to write re.cover letter, until I found your handy notes. Made it much easier than I thought it would be to submit a story. Now, I just have to find a nail and ready it for my rejection letter 🙂

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Vishvanathan

i have been written the story in my own imagination and i also referred many movies stories and also some comics but i have been written with my own words and combination of those stories can i submit this type of work. should i need to submit any audio with this work.

if my work was submitted today after how many days i will be get my payment because i have been dropped out my collage and i have been started some side hustle so i found you i have been writing stories from my age of 16 and now i am 20 i have 4 years of experience so i think i can make this

And i have a doubt with the payment if u are giving 12 cents per word means 1000 words i will be receive120 dollars right or is there any calculation if there can you explain me

cover letter for submitting short story

Howdy. I wonder if you have got a cover letter example on pdf format.

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Dafny Anessa Guiali

Thank you so much!

cover letter for submitting short story

Valerie Cole

I just tried to submit a story with a cover letter, and the system wouldn’t let me enter anything after 78 words. I swear, my cover letter was only 114 words anyway. Did I do something wrong? Thanks.

We have a 450 character limit on the cover letter. We mean it when we say we prefer short cover letters. The cap was put in place to push people in the right direction. Before that, we were seeing far too many 500+ word cover letters.

cover letter for submitting short story

Having never done a cover lette rmyself, I’d love to see an example of one that I can try to match in terms of template.

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Samuel Finn

I just tumbled to your comment section. To keep this brief I’m curious about your ask that submissions don’t include “easy FTL travel,” and wondering what constitutes acceptable FTL travel. If you rule out FTL travel you rule out a lot of sci-fi, don’t you? You can’t reasonably get anywhere outside our solar system without it, and how will any aliens reach us? I just submitted a story to you that includes FTL travel, which derives from an episode in a series I’m writing where I do give an explanation for how it works, perhaps lame and not too technical but at least something. Thanks

cover letter for submitting short story

I suppose that the “acceptable” FTL travel is based in science, not simply a device to pull the plot forward. The modifications in the laws of physics that make the travel possible must be reasonable (plausibility) and be the same for everything else that depend on these laws, whether the thing is directly related to FTL or not (consistency). It may sound a little restrictive, but that’s how I do.

Let’s say that, for your FTL device to work, there is no conservation of energy. Ok, your device creates power from nowhere and the ship crosses the galaxy etc. But, what happens when you, standing on the surface of a planet and subject to gravity, throws a rock up in the air? Will it come back down? Maybe. Or maybe it will reach a height and stay frozen there as if there’s no gravity, or it will accelerate forever and escape the planet. You see, rock throwing has nothing in common with FTL travel, except that conservation of energy limits both situations.

Nothing stops you from saying that the device works by opening a wormhole to tap energy from a star, for example, as long as it is plausible and consistent.

We’re really just trying to eliminate the implausible and hand-wavy stuff. Think about the consequences of having this ability, power necessary to drive it, and its use. Think about how this changes our understanding of physics and society and what else that might impact. Something this big would change many things. A world where this can happen will be forever changed by it.

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Jonah Kalter

I’ve just submitted my short story for your approval. However, I wanted to inform you that due to a 1MB file size limit (my original was 1.8MB), I had to convert the .docx file into a .RTF format. Unfortunately, this conversion altered the formatting from your preferred style. I thought it was important to let you know about this issue.

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Can you please mention the standard word count

That’s in our guidelines. https://clarkesworldmagazine.com/submissions/

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Sahar Adnan

If formatting is a bit difficult for an author, does this affect his/her selection of the story ?

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15 Short Cover Letter Examples & Step-by-Step Guide for 2024

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You’re preparing your job application, and your resume is all set and ready to go.

But the job market is competitive, and you know hiring managers don’t spend a lot of time on individual applications.

Unfortunately, your resume only has so much space for you to convey your skills and experience. How can you tell your full story without losing the hiring manager’s interest?

This is where the short cover letter comes into play.

In this article, we’re going to cover:

  • What Is a Short Cover Letter?

6 Steps to Writing a Short Cover Letter

15 short cover letter examples.

By the end of this guide, you'll be equipped with all the tools needed to create a short cover letter that stands out.

So, let's get started!

What Is a Cover Letter?

A cover letter is a document you can submit alongside your CV or resume for a job application.

When done right, a cover letter complements your resume by adding a personal touch to your job application. It's your chance to speak directly to the hiring manager, giving life to the bullet points on your resume.

Think of it as a conversation starter. Unlike a resume, it lets you get into the details of your skills and experiences and express your enthusiasm for the job, not just list your qualifications.

This personal introduction can be a game changer for your job application since it helps paint a complete picture of you as a professional, using your own words.

Do you still think your resume needs improvement? Check out our detailed guide to learn how to make a resume .

How Long Should a Cover Letter Be?

The ideal length of a cover letter is usually between half a page and one page.

The word count is typically between 250 and 400 words. However, if the job ad specifies how long the cover letter should be, then make sure you abide by that. 

Generally, your cover letter should never be longer than the recommended length. Hiring managers don’t want to read your life story, and if they see a very long cover letter, they probably won’t even bother with it.

Just make sure to pay attention to your cover letter’s format , too. It should have at least three paragraphs consisting of three to five sentences each, but no more than six paragraphs. 

This helps give your cover letter a neat layout and makes it easier to read.

When Should You Write a Short Cover Letter?

There are certain situations when a short cover letter is the best companion to your resume, including: 

  • Requirement from the job ad. If the job ad specifically asks for a brief cover letter, it's important to stick to that. This both shows attention to detail and that you can follow instructions.
  • Restricted character limit.   When you’re applying through an online platform that has strict word count or character limits, you may want to write a short cover letter. This way, you can stay within the required limits without sacrificing any essential information.
  • Email application. If you're expanding your professional network or sending a job application through email, the person receiving your message may prefer something brief and to the point. A shorter cover letter gets your message across without overwhelming the reader, and it makes it more likely that they'll read and remember your application.
  • Industry standard. Certain industries, like tech startups, value straightforward communication. Here, a short cover letter can make a stronger impact than a longer one. It shows the hiring manager that you can communicate effectively and that you value the reader's time.
  • Limited experience. If you're early in your career or amid a career change and you don't have a lot of relevant experience, a short cover letter can be more powerful. It allows you to focus solely on what you can offer, so every word counts.

Writing a short cover letter is easy once you know the process.

Just follow these simple steps:

#1. Plan Ahead of Writing

Before you write your cover letter , create an outline.

Having an outline for your short cover letter can help you write a more effective text, and it can help you see which crucial points you’ve covered.

An outline also helps keep your cover letter focused and coherent. It makes sure you stick to the most relevant details of your background, without any unnecessary details that could make you go over the word count.

#2. Take Time to Reflect

To get the ball rolling on writing your short cover letter, start by asking yourself some questions.

The goal of these questions is to help you pinpoint what the hiring manager wants to know and to make sure every word on your cover letter adds value to your job application.

Here are some questions your short cover should always answer:

  • What excites you about this company and this specific role?
  • Which of your skills and achievements are most relevant to the job ?
  • How have you made a measurable contribution in your previous roles?
  • How can you, based on everything so far, contribute to the company?

Don’t worry if the first draft of your text doesn’t look perfect. Any writer can tell you that the perfect text takes time and careful editing.

#3. Follow the Standard Cover Letter Structure

Your short cover letter should always be structured neatly and follow the same guidelines a regular cover letter would.

Here’s what that includes:

  • Cover Letter Header. The very top of your short cover letter should include a header. We recommend choosing something that matches your resume. This is where your essential contact information is going to be, along with the hiring manager’s contact details.
  • Personalized Greeting. Always address your cover letter to the person who’s going to be reading it. Do some research to find their name, and forget the age-old “To Whom It May Concern.” We recommend using something like “Dear Ms. Smith” or “Dear Axel Smith" for a professional yet personalized touch.
  • Opening Paragraph. The first paragraph is the introduction to the rest of your cover letter. Use it to mention your background, such as your education or job title , and explain why you’re interested in the role. Include one or two of your most impressive achievements to pique the hiring manager’s curiosity and make them read the rest of your cover letter.
  • Main Body. The next paragraphs should focus on how you’re qualified for the position and why the hiring manager should choose you over other applicants. Emphasize your essential skills and any relevant certifications that make you stand out from the crowd. Mention why you’re a good match for the company, such as the common values you share with them or how you look forward to working on some of their interesting projects.
  • Conclusion. End your cover letter by quickly recapping your key selling points, then add a call to action and a professional closing line. Urging the hiring manager to get in touch with you to discuss your application increases the likelihood that they actually will.

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#4. Shorten Your Text

Once you’ve written your cover letter, it’s time to make sure it’s short.

It’s easy to get carried away when writing. When you’re describing your professional experience and passion for the industry you’re applying to, you might feel like there’s a lot you need to explain.

But the key to writing a short cover letter is to cut away everything that doesn’t need to be there.

Hiring managers don't have time to lose, and they quickly skim through tons of applications. If you want your short cover letter to grab their attention, you need to make sure you’re only focusing on the most important information and that your text is easy to follow.

While editing your text, remove any mention of skills or experiences that aren’t relevant to the job you’re applying for. You want every sentence in your brief cover letter to be impactful and memorable, not a novel about your life story.

#5. Proofread Carefully

One of the biggest cover letter mistakes is forgetting to double-check for any spelling errors.

Typos and bad grammar are some of the biggest deal-breakers for hiring managers. In fact, nearly 80% of hiring managers will reject an application if they see spelling mistakes .

Always read your cover letter carefully to catch any mistakes, and use tools like Grammarly or QuillBot to double-check your spelling and grammar.

You can even get a friend or relative to read your cover letter for you, just in case you and the spell-checking tool let something slip by.

#6. Use a Cover Letter Template

Design can’t be ignored when you’re writing a short cover letter.

After all, before the hiring manager reads your cover letter, they’re going to look at it. And with less text on the page, how your cover letter looks becomes increasingly important.

That’s why, when creating your cover letter, you have to carefully adjust the layout, tweak the page margins, set the line spacing, choose the most appropriate font, and make sure your text never exceeds the word count.

Thankfully, it doesn’t have to be that hard.

Just use one of our cover letter templates ! Try our free resume builder and pick one of our resume templates to create a matching application in minutes.

We've collaborated with hiring experts worldwide to create templates that check all the boxes when it comes to industry requirements and visual appeal. Try them now for a stress-free application process!

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Need some inspiration? Check out these short cover letter examples for different professions and levels of experience.

#1. College Student Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information:

Jamie Smith  

College Student  

555-123-4567  

[email protected]  

Sacramento, CA  

linkedin.com/in/made-up-person  

Amanda Johnson

Made Up Marketing Group

456 Maple Drive

Boston, MA 01235

Dear Ms. Johnson,

As a recent Boston University Business Administration graduate with a marketing focus, I am excited to apply for the entry-level marketing position at Made Up Marketing Group. My academic and hands-on experience, including a significant project that boosted a local bookstore's online sales by 20% in three months, has equipped me with solid marketing principles and digital tool proficiency.

My internship at Bright Innovations honed my skills in social media campaigns, consumer data analysis, and event coordination, deepening my understanding of consumer behavior and targeted marketing. I admire Made Up Marketing Group's innovative branding and commitment to team creativity and growth. I am eager to bring my background and passion to your dynamic team.

Looking forward to discussing how I can contribute to your company's success.

Jamie Smith

Check out a full college student cover letter example here.

#2. Substitute Teacher Short Cover Letter Example

Contact information:

Liam Thompson

Substitute Teacher

413-554-7890

[email protected]

Providence, RI

linkedin.com/in/made-up-person

Principal Jennifer Walters

St. Mary Academy - Bay View

Riverside, RI

Dear Principal Walters,

I'm eager to express my interest in the substitute teacher role at St. Mary Academy - Bay View for the 2023-2024 school year. My BA degree and varied teaching experience from early childhood to high school have honed my adaptability and ability to create engaging learning environments.

My commitment to fostering a positive and inclusive classroom aligns with St. Mary Academy's values. My organizational skills, strong work ethic, and genuine passion for education can help me effectively manage classrooms and keep students engaged. I'm enthusiastic about the opportunity to join your team and contribute to your students' academic and personal growth.

Looking forward to discussing how my experience can support St. Mary Academy's mission.

Best regards,

Check out a full substitute teacher cover letter example here.

#3. Barista Short Cover Letter Example

Contact information: Alex Johnson Barista   555-789-1234   [email protected]   Seattle, WA   linkedin.com/in/made-up-person

TO:  Mr. John Smith   Hiring Manager   Brewista Café   123 Coffee Lane   Seattle, WA

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm eager to apply for the barista position at Brewista Café. With three years of hands-on experience, I'm confident I can bring the skill and dedication your team needs. My quick and accurate work resulted in a 20% tip increase in just three months, and I'm no stranger to busy shifts, often handling over 200 orders daily.

I excel at making various drinks quickly without compromising quality, ensuring customer satisfaction and team productivity. Additionally, I engage with customers, meeting their needs and recommending drinks based on their preferences. I always pitch in to help the team, be it restocking or cleaning, especially during slow business hours.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to discussing how I can contribute to your team.

Sincerely, Alex Johnson

#4. Nurse Practitioner Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: Velma Rivers Board Certified Nurse Practitioner 555-123-4567 [email protected] Denver, CO linkedin.com/in/made-up-person

TO: Hiring Team Hearty Health Medical Inc. Denver, CO

Dear Hiring Team,

I am enthusiastic about the Nurse Practitioner position at Hearty Health Medical Inc. Your commitment to accessible and quality care aligns perfectly with my professional goals. With my Master of Science in Nursing, board certification, and extensive clinical experience, I am well-prepared to contribute to your telehealth platform.

My background includes treating a wide range of conditions and an active NP license in multiple states, ensuring I understand diverse healthcare needs. My proficiency in online healthcare tools and Independent Prescriptive Authority equips me to provide comprehensive care remotely.

I am excited about the opportunity to support your vision of making healthcare more accessible through telehealth. I look forward to discussing how my clinical expertise can help advance Hearty Health Medical's mission.

Please reach out to arrange an interview at your convenience.

Velma Rivers

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#5. Attorney Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: John Smith Attorney 555-123-4567 [email protected] Arizona, USA linkedin.com/in/made-up-person

TO: Hiring Manager Elevate Arizona, USA

Dear Hiring Manager,

I am writing to express my interest in the Junior Commercial Attorney position at Elevate. With over three years of legal practice experience, I have provided extensive transactional support to business clients, including drafting, reviewing, and negotiating commercial contracts, with an emphasis on NDAs.

Elevate's focus on enhancing contractual infrastructure deeply resonates with my commitment to delivering high-quality legal solutions. I am eager to review and negotiate contracts and work collaboratively within the team.

Elevate's dedication to innovation in the legal industry resonates with my career goals and values. I am excited about the opportunity to bring my legal skills and dedication to excellence to your team.

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#6. Retail Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: Jordan Martinez Retail Talent Specialist 123-456-7890 [email protected] Seattle, WA linkedin.com/in/made-up-person

TO: Talent Management Team Aritzia

Dear Talent Management Team,

I'm excited about the Specialist Retail Talent Management position at Aritzia. Your dedication to fostering high-performing teams aligns perfectly with my work ethic and professional goals. I’m confident that my talent management experience in the world of retail will help me ensure the right fit, cultural integration, and team potential.

My focus has always been on fair practices, smooth transitions, and optimized compensation to support team stability and productivity. Your holistic approach to performance assessment resonates with me, and I believe I can help foster a motivated workforce.

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#7. Actor Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: Chris Parker Actor & Theater Enthusiast   555-123-4567   [email protected]   Los Angeles, CA linkedin.com/in/made-up-person  

TO: Casting Director Local Theatre X Production X Los Angeles, CA

Dear Casting Director,

I'm thrilled about the Kids Production X casting call at Local Theatre Y. The captivating storyline aligns perfectly with my passion for children's theater. With experience in entertaining and engaging young audiences, I'm well-suited for vibrant characters.

I'm particularly drawn to Character Z, but open to other roles. My work ethic, dependability, and availability make me an excellent long-term addition to Local Theatre Y. I bring patience, enthusiasm, and a knack for connecting with kids.

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#8. Digital Marketing Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: Jamie Williams Digital Marketing Associate 555-123-4567 [email protected] Austin, TX linkedin.com/in/made-up-person

TO: Alexandra Smith Marketing & Events Manager Marketing Agency X Austin, TX

Dear Ms. Smith,

I am excited about the Digital Marketing Associate position at Marketing Agency X. With over two years of digital marketing experience, I've led successful campaigns across various platforms, optimizing results and managing donor platforms.

My proficiency in tools like Google Analytics and strong project management skills can make me a valuable asset to your team. I am eager to contribute to your mission of enhancing brand awareness and fundraising through data-driven marketing.

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#9. IT Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information:  Roger Valdorf Desktop Analyst   555-123-4567   [email protected]   Denver, CO linkedin.com/in/made-up-person  

TO:   Wendy Welton Hiring Manager FakeTech Group Denver, CO  

Dear Ms. Welton,

I'm writing to express my interest in the Desktop Analyst position at FakeTech Group. My experience in providing technical support, both on-site and remotely, aligns well with your company's values of innovation and user-focused technology.

I am drawn to FakeTech's commitment to continuous learning and inclusivity. Throughout my career, I've sought to deepen my technical knowledge and ensure all users feel valued.

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#10. Sales Short Cover Letter Example

Alex Thompson   Sales Representative   555-123-4567   [email protected]   Austin, TX   linkedin.com/in/made-up-person

Ms. Emily Stevens   Hiring Manager The IT Support Center   Austin, TX

Dear Ms. Stevens,

I'm writing to express my interest in the IT Support Center's Sales Representative role. With a strong background in sales and client relationship management, I believe I'm an ideal fit for this position.

My Business degree from the University of Texas and experience in sales have equipped me with essential skills, including proficiency in tools like Salesforce for efficient data management. In my current role at TechSolutions, I've successfully closed deals, boosted company revenue, and achieved high client retention rates.

I excel in connecting with decision-makers, understanding their needs, and working collaboratively within a team. I'm excited about the opportunity to contribute to your team and share your commitment to skill development and inclusive customer support.

I look forward to discussing how I can make a valuable impact. Please reach out to me via email or phone to arrange an interview.

Sincerely, Alex Thompson

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#11. Business Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: John Doe   Business Development Specialist   555-123-4567   [email protected]   New York, NY   linkedin.com/in/made-up-person  

TO: Chet Jones Hiring Manager   Pear Inc. New York, NY  

Dear Mr. Jones,

I came across the Business Development Representative role at Pear Inc. and was immediately intrigued. Your vision aligns with my passion for driving business growth through meaningful connections.

In my previous role, I consistently exceeded quarterly goals by at least 23%, showcasing my ability to communicate effectively with C-level executives and craft compelling proposals. I'm proficient in SalesForce and experienced in account management.

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#12. Graphic Designer Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: Jordan Smith   Graphic Designer   555-321-4321   [email protected]   San Francisco, CA   linkedin.com/in/made-up-person  

TO:  Lucy Pleasant Hiring Manager Tech Company X San Francisco, CA

Dear Ms. Pleasant,

I discovered the Remote Graphic Designer role at Tech Company X and was instantly drawn to your creative approach and company culture.

With expertise in Adobe tools, project management, and social media, I've crafted impactful designs and collaborated effectively with diverse teams. My commitment to delivering quality work aligns with your values.

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#13. Team Leader Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: Jessica Martin Team Leader 657-390-2145 [email protected] Orlando, FL linkedin.com/in/made-up-person

TO: Hiring Manager XYZ Digital Solutions Remote

I'm writing to express my interest in the Team Leader position at XYZ Digital Solutions. With extensive experience in leading teams and driving project success, I believe I'm well-suited for this role.

My leadership is marked by strong communication, fostering collaboration, and promoting innovation. I've successfully trained and mentored teams, enhancing productivity and building a supportive and goal-oriented culture. Proficient in digital tools, I enhance team efficiency and stay ahead of industry trends.

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#14. Receptionist Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: Sarah Miller Front Desk Receptionist 555-123-4567 [email protected] San Francisco, CA linkedin.com/in/made-up-person

TO: Hiring Manager Permanente Luxury Inn Santa Clara, CA 189 Sunflower Boulevard

Dear Front Desk Team,

I am excited to apply for the front desk receptionist role at the Permanente Luxury Inn, Santa Clara. My experience in customer service, cash handling, and efficient management of front desk operations aligns well with the requirements of this position.

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#15. Dental Assistant Short Cover Letter Example

Contact Information: Jane Smith   Dental Assistant   555-123-4567   [email protected]   Seattle, WA   linkedin.com/in/made-up-person  

TO: Washington State Department of Corrections   Health Services Team   Seafair Lows, WA   [email protected]  

I'm applying for the Dental Assistant position at Seafair Lows Corrections Center. As a registered Dental Assistant with a comprehensive background in direct chairside assisting, patient communication, record-keeping, and inventory management, I am well-equipped to meet the demands of this role.

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  • You should always include a cover letter with your job application, even though some hiring managers are divided about them. A short cover letter is a great choice to satisfy both types of hiring managers without taking a risk.
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Posts Use Altered Image of Secret Service Agents Following Trump Shooting

By Alan Jaffe

Posted on July 15, 2024

Este artículo estará disponible en español en El Tiempo Latino .

The actions of the Secret Service at the Pennsylvania rally where former President Donald Trump was wounded in an assassination attempt are under review. But social media posts show an altered photo to falsely claim agents were smiling while moving Trump to safety. The original Associated Press photo shows the agents weren’t smiling.

President Joe Biden has called for an independent review and members of Congress plan an investigation into security measures taken — particularly by the Secret Service — at the July 13 rally in Butler, Pennsylvania, where former President Donald Trump was wounded in an attempted assassination.

The Secret Service, whose duties include the protection of the president, is being questioned regarding preparations for the event, the size of the security perimeter and how the shooter, identified as Thomas Matthew Crooks , 20, was able to get access to a rooftop near the rally stage. Crooks, of Bethel Park, Pennsylvania, was killed by Secret Service snipers at the scene. One man attending the rally was killed, and two others were injured during the shooting, Pennsylvania State Police said.

Video of the assassination attempt shows Trump addressing the crowd and reacting as a bullet strikes him in the ear, followed by Secret Service agents surrounding him and slowly helping him up and off the stage. Before being moved off the stage, Trump can be seen raising a fist in the air.

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That image of Trump’s gesture has been altered, however, in social media posts to falsely show two of the agents smiling as they assisted Trump and to claim the incident was “STAGED.”

A July 14 Threads post shows the altered image with a caption that says, “Why are the secret service smiling? STAGED.”

A video in a July 14 Instagram post shows several photos from the shooting — including two versions of the image of Trump with his fist raised as the agents help him. One accurately shows the agents with concerned expressions on their faces, and the other, altered image shows them smiling . The narrator of the video claims, “Something doesn’t look right. … Is it fake?”

What is fake is the altered image of the Secret Service agents smiling.

The original image showing Trump raising his fist as the agents move him off the stage was taken by Associated Press photographer Evan Vucci, whose photos in the immediate aftermath of the shooting were published by the AP on July 14. The caption on the original photo reads: “Republican presidential candidate former President Donald Trump is surrounded by U.S. Secret Service agents at a campaign rally, Saturday, July 13, 2024, in Butler, Pa. (AP Photo/Evan Vucci).”

The social media posts use a doctored version of that AP photo to make the false claim about the agents. The original photo shows the agents with concerned looks on their faces.

Secret Service Director Kimberly Cheatle issued a statement on July 15 about the actions of agents on the scene in Butler and the investigation of the incident. Cheatle said, in part: “Secret Service personnel on the ground moved quickly during the incident, with our counter sniper team neutralizing the shooter and our agents implementing protective measures to ensure the safety of former president Donald Trump.”

“The Secret Service is working with all involved Federal, state and local agencies to understand what happened, how it happened, and how we can prevent an incident like this from ever taking place again. We understand the importance of the independent review announced by President Biden yesterday and will participate fully. We will also work with the appropriate Congressional committees on any oversight action,” Cheatle also said. 

Editor’s note:  FactCheck.org  is one of several organizations  working with Facebook  to debunk misinformation shared on social media. Our previous stories can be found  here . Facebook has  no control  over our editorial content.

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Commonwealth of Pennsylvania. “Pennsylvania State Police Identify Victims Shot During Attempted Assassination of Former President Trump.” 14 Jul 2024.

Kanno-Young, Zolan, et al. “Secret Service Under Scrutiny After Assassination Attempt on Trump.” New York Times. 14 Jul 2024.

Tolan, Casey. “What we know about the Trump rally gunman so far.” CNN 14 Jul 2024.

Tsirkin, Julie, et al. “Congress demands answers from Secret Service after Trump assassination attempt.” NBC News. 14 Jul 2024.

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Wild, Whitney, Evan Perez and Tierney Sneed. “Secret Service faces serious questions about security footprint and rooftop access at Trump Event.” CNN. 15 Jul 2024.

Congress demands answers from Secret Service after Trump assassination attempt

WASHINGTON — Top leaders in Congress quickly unified to rebuke a failed assassination attempt on Donald Trump at a Saturday rally, demanding briefings and planning investigations into the incident that left the former president injured.

“Congress will do a full investigation of the tragedy yesterday to determine where there were lapses in security and anything else that the American people need to know and deserve to know,” House Speaker Mike Johnson, R-La., said Sunday on the “ TODAY ” show . “But in the meantime, we’ve got to turn the rhetoric down. We’ve got to turn the temperature down in this country.”

Johnson said he has “gotten briefings from law enforcement” and asked “pointed questions” of Homeland Security Secretary Alejandro Mayorkas on Saturday night.

Top Democrats on Capitol Hill also condemned the shooting.

“I am horrified by what happened at the Trump rally in Pennsylvania and relieved that former President Trump is safe. Political violence has no place in our country,” Senate Majority Leader Chuck Schumer, D-N.Y., said in a statement. His office said after the incident he had been briefed on the latest developments.

House Oversight Committee Chair James Comer, R-Ky., asked Secret Service Director Kimberly Cheatle to testify at a July 22 hearing. House Homeland Security Committee Chair Mark Green, R-Tenn., also demanded answers from Mayorkas in a Sunday letter.

A police officer stands at his car early Sunday, July 14, 2024, closing access to the site of the rally

Green held a call with Cheatle on Sunday afternoon, according to a Homeland Security Committee GOP spokesperson, and said the majority on the panel planned to hold a member briefing on Monday.

In a separate letter to Cheatle, Rep. Ruben Gallego, D-Ariz., demanded answers on the security lapse at the Trump rally, including whether the Trump campaign requested additional protection and whether those resources were denied.

Gallego, a military veteran, wrote that the shooting “raises grave concerns regarding the security measures — or lack thereof — that were taken to protect a former President of the United States and a Major Presidential Candidate.”

“I call on all those responsible for the planning, approving, and executing of this failed security plan to be held accountable and to testify before Congress immediately,” Gallego wrote in the letter, obtained first by NBC News.

Reps. Mike Lawler, R-N.Y., and Ritchie Torres, D-N.Y., announced in the wake of the shooting that they would propose legislation “providing President Joe Biden, former President Donald Trump, and presidential candidate Robert Kennedy Jr. with enhanced Secret Service protection.”

In a notice sent by the Senate Notification Center late Saturday in the wake of the assassination attempt, Senate offices were told that Capitol Police is “not tracking any additional threats to Members.”

“Capitol Police are coordinating to provide additional support at events related to both the Republican and Democratic National Conventions,” the notice added.

House offices received a similar notice earlier that night, and members will receive a virtual security briefing on Monday afternoon, according to two people invited.

Sen. Rick Scott, R-Fla., called on the Democratic-controlled Senate Homeland Security Committee to hold an investigation on the shooting before Aug. 1 “to demand answers from the Department of Homeland Security (DHS) and the U.S. Secret Service on how this happened and what steps are being taken to investigate this assassination attempt and make sure it never happens again.”

Sens. Josh Hawley, R-Mo., and Jacky Rosen, D-Nev., two members of the committee, also called for an inquiry.

“We need more details & answers about the assassination attempt against former President Trump so there can be accountability & we can ensure this never happens again. As a member of the Homeland Security & Governmental Affairs Committee, I’m calling for a hearing to investigate,” Rosen said on X .

An aide to Senate Homeland Security Committee Chair Gary Peters, D-Mich., said Sunday afternoon that the panel would be conducting an investigation and had requested a member briefing from DHS. The aide also said Peters would speak with Mayorkas on Sunday.

Former House Speaker Nancy Pelosi, D-Calif., herself a past target of political violence, said in a statement: “As one whose family has been the victim of political violence, I know firsthand that political violence of any kind has no place in our society. I thank God that former President Trump is safe.”

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Julie Tsirkin is a correspondent covering Capitol Hill.

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Sahil Kapur is a senior national political reporter for NBC News.

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Ali Vitali is a Capitol Hill correspondent for NBC News, based in Washington.

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Frank Thorp V is a producer and off-air reporter covering Congress for NBC News, managing coverage of the Senate.

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Secret Service Under Scrutiny After Assassination Attempt on Trump

President Biden calls for a review of the protective agency’s actions after the attack, which left an audience member dead and two critically wounded.

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Former President Donald J. Trump, wearing a blue suit, white shirt and red baseball cap, walking down steps. American flags are behind him, and people wearing dark suits, white shirts and sunglasses are to his side.

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President Biden on Sunday called for an “independent review” of security measures before and after the attempted assassination of former President Donald J. Trump, while directing the Secret Service to review all of its security measures for the Republican National Convention this week.

Mr. Biden’s directive, though brief and without specifics, is likely to increase the scrutiny of the decisions and possible failures of the agency charged first and foremost with protecting the lives of the country’s current and former leaders, and their families.

Less than 24 hours after Mr. Trump was injured at a campaign rally in Butler, Pa., members of Congress were promising hearings and former law enforcement officials were questioning why the warehouse roof where the would-be assassin, Thomas Matthew Crooks of Bethel Park, Pa., fired shots was not covered by the Secret Service’s security perimeter, despite being within the range of some guns.

Mr. Trump, the presumptive Republican nominee, was herded off the stage and pronounced fine, but the gunman came shockingly close to succeeding. A spectator was killed in the shooting and two others were critically wounded.

“Congress will do a full investigation of the tragedy yesterday to determine where there were lapses in security and anything else that the American people need to know and deserve to know,” Speaker Mike Johnson, Republican of Louisiana, said Sunday on NBC.

The chair of the House oversight committee also asked the Secret Service director, Kimberly A. Cheatle, to testify at a hearing on July 22.

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Trump survives assassination attempt at campaign rally, as it unfolded

The FBI is investigating Saturday’s shooting at a Trump rally in Pennsylvania as an attempted assassination and act of domestic terror. However authorities say, a motive has not yet been identified.

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Law enforcement officials are working to learn more about the 20-year-old who tried to assassinate former President Donald Trump at a rally in Butler, Pennsylvania, on Saturday.

In a briefing Sunday, FBI officials told reporters they had yet to determine what motivated the shooter to open fire from a nearby rooftop, killing one spectator and critically injuring two others before he was shot dead by the Secret Service. The FBI believes the shooter acted alone.

What to know:

  • More on the shooter: The FBI named Thomas Matthew Crooks , 20, of Bethel Park, Pennsylvania, as the suspect behind the apparent assassination attempt. In a briefing with reporters, FBI officials said the AR-style rifle used in the attack was legally purchased by the gunman’s father.
  • Latest on the victims: The man who was killed at the rally was identified as Corey Comperatore, a former fire chief from the area who used his body to shield his family. At least two other people were injured: David Dutch, 57, of New Kensington, Pennsylvania and James Copenhaver, 74, of Moon Township, Pennsylvania. Both were listed in stable condition as of Sunday.
  • Biden delivers Oval Office address: In a prime-time national address , the president said “we must not go down” the road of political violence in America and called for unity.

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Trump at the start of his rally. (AP Photo/Gene J. Puskar)

Donald Trump spent much of Sunday on the phone with friends, news hosts and local and foreign officials the day after he was injured in an assassination attempt.

Ohio Pastor Darrell Scott, a longtime ally, said Trump “was in great spirits” when they spoke Sunday morning, hours after the shooting.

“He was great, like he always is. He didn’t even make a big deal of it,” Scott said. “He was actually trying to downplay it somewhat, asking how I was doing.”

Former RNC chair Reince Priebus, who also served as Trump’s White House chief of staff, told ABC’s “This Week” that Trump was “grateful for the miracle of what happened, in his case. ... One quarter inch turned the other direction and we’re obviously talking about something very different this morning.”

Within minutes of the gunfire, the attempted assassination of former President Donald Trump spawned a vast sea of claims reflecting the frightening uncertainties of the moment as well as America’s fevered, polarized political climate.

Activists gathering in Milwaukee for the first day of Republican National Convention say they’ll continue their long-awaited plans for marches and rallies Monday in the wake of an apparent assassination attempt on former President Donald Trump. (AP video by Nathan Ellegren)

Associated Press journalists recall the scene when a shooter fired at former President Donald Trump during a rally.

Tony Perkins, among the most influential Christian conservatives in the Republican Party, was preparing to mount a confrontation with convention planners over his disdain for how debate during the RNC’s platform committee was shut down on Monday, all but eliminating objections to the Trump campaign’s desire to soften language on abortion.

The attempted assassination changed all that, Perkins told The Associated Press after a prayer service in suburban Milwaukee Sunday evening.

“We live in a violent society. And we run the risk of becoming callous to it. And if we become callous to it, we’re going to have more of it,” Perkins said. “I’m hoping and praying it’s a wake-up call in many ways.”

“So, as a result, I’m stepping back from forcing the issue on the platform,” he added. “More divisiveness would not be healthy.”

Perkins called social media “a contagion” for toxic rhetoric passed along by people who do not feel that they’re heard by their government or leaders, and attributed the Jan. 6, 2021, attack on the U.S. Capitol in part to the notion of overheated online rage.

“We need to stop,” he said.

And while thanking God during the service for Trump’s survival, Perkins told more than 100 in the Pewaukee church, “Lord, I believe that our nation is at such a volatile moment that yesterday could have torn this nation right in half.”

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This 2021 photo provided by Bethel Park School District shows student Thomas Matthew Crooks who graduated from Bethel Park High School with the Class of 2022, in Bethel Park, Pa. (Bethel Park School District via AP)

The 20-year-old man who tried to assassinate former President Donald Trump first came to law enforcement’s attention at Saturday’s rally when spectators noticed him acting strangely outside the campaign event. The tip sparked a frantic search, but officers were unable to find him before he managed to get on a roof, where he opened fire.

In the wake of the shooting that killed one spectator, investigators are hunting for any clues about what may have drove Thomas Matthew Crooks, of Bethel Park, Pennsylvania, to carry out the shocking attack. The FBI said they were investigating it as a potential act of domestic terrorism , but the absence of a clear ideological motive by the man shot dead by Secret Service allowed conspiracy theories to flourish.

The FBI said it believes Crooks, who had bomb-making materials in the car he drove to the rally, acted alone. Investigators have found no threatening comments on social media accounts or ideological positions that could help explain what led him to target Trump.

Crooks graduated from Bethel Park High School in 2022. His senior year, Crooks was among several students given an award for math and science, according to a Tribune-Review story at the time.

He tried out for the school’s rifle team but was turned away because he was a bad shooter, said Frederick Mach, a current captain of the team who was a few years behind Crooks at the school.

Jason Kohler, who said he attended the same high school but did not share any classes with Crooks, said Crooks was bullied at school and sat alone at lunch time. Other students mocked him for the clothes he wore, which included hunting outfits, Kohler said.

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Former President Donald Trump told The Washington Examiner that he has rewritten the speech he was set to deliver at the Republican National Convention in Milwaukee on Thursday after being the target of an attempted assassination at his rally Saturday.

“The speech I was going to give on Thursday was going to be a humdinger,” he told the news outlet in an article posted Sunday evening.

In the interview, the presumptive Republican presidential nominee says he will now call for a new effort at national unity, noting that people from different political views have called him.

“This is a chance to bring the whole country, even the whole world, together. The speech will be a lot different, a lot different than it would’ve been two days ago,” he said.

Trump also reflected on the moment a bullet pierced the upper part of his right ear. He said he was saved from death because he turned from the crowd to look at a screen showing off a chart he was referring to.

“That reality is just setting in,” he told the news outlet as he boarded his plane in Bedminster, New Jersey, for Milwaukee. “I rarely look away from the crowd. Had I not done that in that moment, well, we would not be talking today, would we?”

Former Secret Service Agent Tim McCarthy was shot on the day there was an attempt to assassinate former President Ronald Reagan. As he watched the shooting at the Trump rally unfold on Saturday he noticed similar failures in the attempts to protect the president.

The former fire chief who was killed at a Pennsylvania rally for Donald Trump is remembered by his colleagues as a man who served his community. (AP Video/Jessie Wardarski)

A classmate of Thomas Matthew Crooks, suspected of attempting to assassinate former President Donald Trump, said the 20-year-old suspect was frequently bullied and sat alone at lunch time at their high school in Bethel Park, Penn. (AP Video/Terry Chea)

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As seen from a window from the Colonnade outside the Oval Office, President Joe Biden addresses the nation on the assassination attempt on former President Donald Trump, at the White House in Washington, Sunday, July 14, 2024. (AP Photo/Mark Schiefelbein)

Biden says that during the Republican National Convention, he has “no doubt” Republicans will “criticize my record and offer their own vision for this country.” But he promised in campaigning to lay out “our vision.”

He used the address to urge all Americans not to accept an escalation in political violence as normal.

“We debate and disagree, we compare and contrast ... but in America we resolve our differences at the ballot box,” Biden said in his address.

He added: “Politics must never be a literal battlefield. God forbid a killing field.”

Biden spoke for about five minutes from the Oval Office and noted that the Republican National Convention was opening in Milwaukee on Monday, while he himself would be traveling the country to campaign for reelection.

He said passions would run high on both sides and that the stakes of the election were enormous.

But the president added, “it’s time to cool it down” and noted not just the weekend attack on Trump but also the possibility of election-year violence on multiple fronts.

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President Joe Biden addresses the nation from the Oval Office of the White House in Washington, Sunday, July 14, 2024, about the assassination attempt of Republican presidential candidate former President Donald Trump at a campaign rally in Pennsylvania. (Erin Schaff/The New York Times via AP, Pool)

President Joe Biden says “we can’t, we must not go down” the road of political violence in American after Saturday’s attempted Trump assassination.

In a prime-time national address, Biden said that political passions can run high but “we must never descend into violence.”

“We can do this,” Biden implored, saying the nation was founded on a democracy that gave reason and balance a chance to prevail over brute force. “American democracy — where arguments are made in good faith. American democracy where the rule of law is respected. Where decency, dignity, fair play aren’t just quaint notions, they’re living, breathing realities.”

The president is planning to deliver extended remarks to the nation in an address from the Oval Office starting at 8 p.m. EDT.

His campaign said the president would touch on “the need for every American to come together” to end political violence in the U.S.

Canadian Prime Minister Justin Trudeau spoke with former President Trump on Sunday.

“The Prime Minister condemned yesterday’s appalling assassination attempt and reiterated there’s no place for political violence. The Prime Minister wished the former President well and offered condolences to the shooting victims and to the family of Corey Comperatore,” Trudeau’s office said in a statement.

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A motorcade passes through downtown Milwaukee, July 14, 2024, ahead of the 2024 Republican National Convention. (AP Photo/Jae C. Hong)

The former president said earlier Sunday that he was going to delay his trip because of the attempted assassination, but then decided he didn’t want it to force a change in his schedule.

Trump is not expected to speak at the RNC until Thursday night.

Democratic U.S. Rep. Bennie Thompson says one of his staff members is no longer employed after he learned of a post she made on social media.

Screenshots of her apparent Facebook post, which was related to the attempted assassination of Trump, circulated on social media after the shooting.

The screenshots showed a post in which the staffer appeared to say she does not condone violence but suggested the shooter should get “shooting lessons” and should not have missed.

The AP was not able to view the user’s private Facebook profile to identify whether the post was still up.

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A general view during rehearsals at the 2024 Republican National Convention at the Fiserv Forum, July 14, 2024, in Milwaukee. (AP Photo/Paul Sancya)

Wisconsin Gov. Tony Evers is asking officials to revisit a prior decision that allows people to bring guns within blocks of the Republican National Convention after an assassination attempt against former President Donald Trump, a person familiar with the matter told the Associated Press on Sunday.

Evers believes additional steps need to be taken to keep the convention’s attendees, law enforcement and the local community safe, the person said. The person could not discuss details of the request publicly and spoke to the AP on condition of anonymity.

The request was made to the U.S. Secret Service, which would bring it to the Republican National Committee, the person said.

The Secret Service said at a news conference Sunday that they were confident in their existing security plan and hadn’t made any changes following the shooting.

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Trump 2024 flag is raised outside of Trump Tower, Sunday, July 14, 2024, in New York. (AP Photo/Yuki Iwamura)

The cloudburst of speculation and conjecture as Americans turned to the internet for news about the Trump rally shooting is the latest sign of how social media has emerged as a dominant source of information — and misinformation — for many, and a contributor to the distrust and turbulence now driving American politics.

Mentions of Trump on social media soared up to 17 times the average daily amount in the hours after the shooting, according to PeakMetrics, a cyber firm that tracks online narratives. Many of those mentions were expressions of sympathy for Trump or calls for unity. But many others made unfounded, fantastical claims.

“We saw things like ‘The Chinese were behind it,’ or ‘Antifa was behind it,’ or ‘the Biden administration did it.’ We also saw a claim that the RNC was behind it,’” said Paul Bartel, senior intelligence analyst at PeakMetrics. “Everyone is just speculating. No one really knows what’s going on. They go online to try to figure it out.”

▶ Take a look at some of the unsubstantiated claims that surfaced online following the shooting

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Helmets rest on the locker of firefighter Corey Comperatore at the Buffalo Township Fire Company 27 in Buffalo Township, Pa., Sunday, July 14, 2024. Comperatore was killed during a shooting at a campaign rally for Republican presidential candidate former President Donald Trump in Butler, Pa., on Saturday. (AP Photo/Sue Ogrocki)

Logan Check, left, junior firefighter, and Randy Reamer, right, president and rescue captain at the Buffalo Township Fire Company 27, hang bunting on the fire station in memory of fellow firefighter Corey Comperatore, in Buffalo Township, Pa., Sunday, July 14, 2024. Comperatore was killed during a shooting at a campaign rally for Republican presidential candidate former President Donald Trump in Butler, Pa., on Saturday. The flag at the station house flies at half staff at left. (AP Photo/Sue Ogrocki)

An automobile license plate at the Buffalo Township Fire Company 27 is wrapped in black bunting in Buffalo Township, Pa., Sunday, July 14, 2024. Firefighter Corey Comperatore was killed during a shooting at a campaign rally for Republican presidential candidate former President Donald Trump in Butler, Pa., on Saturday. (AP Photo/Sue Ogrocki)

Corey Comperatore’s quick decision to use his body as a shield against the bullets flying toward his wife and daughter rang true to the close friends and neighbors, who loved and respected the proud 50-year-old Trump supporter.

“He’s a literal hero,” said Mike Morehouse, who lived next to Comperatore for the last eight years.

At least two other people were injured at the rally: David Dutch, 57, of New Kensington, Pennsylvania, and James Copenhaver, 74, of Moon Township, Pennsylvania, according to the Pennsylvania State Police. Both were listed in stable condition as of Sunday.

▶ Read more on the Trump rally shooting victims

The assassination attempt of former President Donald Trump has parallels to the last time a president or presidential candidate was wounded — in 1981, when Ronald Reagan was nearly killed by an assailant’s bullet.

People near where the Republican National Convention is taking place in Milwaukee are reacting to the attempted assassination of the former president and presumptive Republican nominee Donald Trump. (AP video: Carrie Antlfinger)

The shooter at the Trump rally in Butler, Pennsylvania, was able to get astonishingly close to the stage where the former president was speaking, according to an AP analysis of more than a dozen photos and videos from the scene, as well as satellite imagery of the site.

Here’s some of the key moments in the timeline of the shooting:

6:02 p.m. EDT

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Republican presidential candidate former President Donald Trump speaks at a campaign event in Butler, Pa., on Saturday, July 13, 2024. (AP Photo/Gene J. Puskar)

— Trump takes the stage to the strains of “God Bless the U.S.A.” He waves at the cheering crowd and begins his regular rally speech, with spectators both in front of him and behind him on risers.

Around 6:10 p.m.

— After rally-goers notice a man climbing on the top of the roof of a nearby building, a local law enforcement officer climbs to the roof, according to two law enforcement officials.

— A man identified by the FBI as 20-year-old Thomas Matthew Crooks points his rifle at the officer, who retreats down the ladder, the officials said.

— Crooks then quickly fires, according to the officials who spoke to The Associated Press on condition of anonymity to discuss an ongoing investigation.

— As the first pop rings out, Trump says, “Oh.” He raises his hand to his right ear and looks at it before quickly crouching to the ground behind his lectern.

— Secret Service agents rush to the stage and pile atop the former president to shield him.

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Republican presidential candidate former President Donald Trump is surrounded by U.S. Secret Service agents at a campaign rally, Saturday, July 13, 2024, in Butler, Pa. (AP Photo/Evan Vucci)

— Corey Comperatore, a 50-year-old former fire chief attending the rally, is shot and killed. Pennsylvania Gov. Josh Shapiro said Sunday that Comperatore used his body as a shield to protect his wife and daughter.

— Secret Service counter snipers fire back and shoot Crooks.

About 1 minute after the shots

— Video shows Trump getting to his feet and reaching with his right hand toward his face, which was smeared with blood. As Trump stands up, he pumps to the crowd with his right fist.

— Secret Service says “the former president is safe.”

▶ Read the full timeline of the assassination attempt on Trump

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Michael Hensle, left, the FBI Milwaukee office’s special agent in charge, and Audrey Gibson-Cicchino, the Secret Service’s Republican National Convention coordinator, attend a news conference in Milwaukee, Sunday, July 14, 2024. (AP Photo/Jae C. Hong)

The apparent assassination attempt against former President Donald Trump at a rally Saturday did not prompt any changes to the U.S. Secret Service’s security plan for the Republican National Convention that starts Monday, said Audrey Gibson-Cicchino, the Secret Service’s coordinator for the convention, at a press briefing Sunday.

“We are fully prepared and have a comprehensive security plan in place and are ready to go,” Gibson-Cicchino said.

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A United States Secret Service officer moves barricades outside the Fiserv Forum ahead of the 2024 Republican National Convention, July 13, 2024, in Milwaukee. (AP Photo/Morry Gash)

The FBI has seen no known “specific and articulated threats” against the Republican National Convention or anyone attending the event, said Michael Hensle, the FBI special agent in charge of the agency’s Milwaukee field office

The FBI is the lead intelligence agency for the RNC.

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A motorcade with Republican presidential candidate former President Donald Trump arrives at a campaign event in Butler, Pa., on Saturday, July 13, 2024. (AP Photo/Gene J. Puskar)

People watch from the side of the road as a motorcade, presumably transporting Donald Trump to the airport, passes by in Bedminster, N.J., Sunday, July 14, 2024. (AP Photo/Seth Wenig)

In a post shared on social media, Trump campaign adviser Dan Scavino said the former president was “so grateful for all of your prayers, support and well wishes” as he heads to Milwuakee for the Republican National Convention.

The U.S. Secret Service is investigating how a gunman armed with an AR-style rifle was able to get close enough to shoot and injure former President Donald Trump at a rally Saturday in Pennsylvania, a monumental failure of one of the agency’s core duties.

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FILE - Former U.N. Ambassador Nikki Haley speaks in Washington, May 22, 2024. (AP Photo/Cliff Owen, File)

Former U.N. Ambassador Nikki Haley will speak Tuesday at the Republican National Convention in what will be a highly anticipated speech by former President Donald Trump’s last major challenger in this year’s GOP primary.

Haley, who was also elected twice as South Carolina governor, initially was not among the list of speakers but has since been added to the schedule, according to Haley spokesperson Chaney Denton.

The schedule change was confirmed by a Republican official who is familiar with the convention plans but was not authorized to speak publicly.

▶ Read more about Haley’s scheduled RNC appearance

The shooter’s family is cooperating with federal investigators, according to an FBI official.

Relatives of Thomas Matthew Crooks of Bethel Park, Pennsylvania, have not returned multiple messages from The Associated Press seeking comment.

Attorney General Merrick Garland told reporters that the Justice Department has “no tolerance for such violence and as Americans we must have no tolerance for it.”

“This must stop,” he said.

FBI Director Christopher Wray says authorities “will leave no stone unturned” in their investigation of the assassination attempt on former President Donald Trump.

In a call with reporters Sunday, Wray called the shooting an “attack on democracy and our democratic process.”

“An attempt to assassinate a presidential candidate can only be described as absolutely despicable and will not be tolerated in this country,” Wray said.

The FBI says they believe the AR-style rifle the Trump rally shooter used was legally purchased by the gunman’s father.

Kevin Rojek, special agent in charge of the Pittsburgh Field Office, told reporters that authorities don’t yet know how the shooter gained access to the weapon, and whether he took it without his father’s knowledge.

“These are facts that we’ll flesh out as we conduct interviews,” Rojek said. Authorities recovered the weapon at the scene of the shooting.

FBI Deputy Director Paul Abbate says threatening online rhetoric has been “ticking up” since the attempted assassination of former President Donald Trump.

He says people are going online to pose as the shooter, who was killed by U.S. Secret Service.

Abbate says they are aware of the increased activity and monitoring it closely.

FBI officials say they believe the Trump rally shooter acted alone.

They have not yet identified an ideology, but they are combing through his social media feeds and the shooter’s weapons. So far, they have not found any threatening writing or social media posts.

FBI officials said they have located a suspicious device and defused it. They have received more than 2,000 tips.

The FBI says it is investigating the Trump rally shooting as an attempted assassination and also an act of domestic terrorism.

The gunman was not previously on the radar screen of the FBI. He’s believed to have acted alone.

The FBI defines domestic terrorism as acts inside the U.S. that are intended to intimidate or coerce civilians or influence government policy.

Helmets rest on the locker of firefighter Corey Comperatore at the Buffalo Township Fire Company 27 in Buffalo Township, Pa., July 14, 2024. (AP Photo/Sue Ogrocki)

A crew was power-washing the front of the Buffalo Township Volunteer Fire Company on Sunday with plans to install memorial drapery to honor the slain former chief, Corey Comperatore.

Assistant Chief Ricky Heasley of Sarver, who knew Comperatore for more than a decade, remembers him as very outgoing and full of life.

“He never had a bad word,” Heasley said.

A GoFundMe launched to support Comperatore’s family had already surpassed more than $180,000 in donations as of Sunday.

▶ Read more on what’s known about the Trump rally shooting victim

The Wisconsin Republican Party Chairman choked up Sunday while talking about the apparent assassination attempt of Donald Trump ahead of the party’s convention in Milwaukee. (AP video by Carrie Antlfinger)

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President Joe Biden speaks from the Roosevelt Room of the White House in Washington, Sunday, July 14, 2024, about the apparent assassination attempt of former President Donald Trump at a campaign rally in Pennsylvania. Listening are Vice President Kamala Harris and Attorney General Merrick Garland. (AP Photo/Susan Walsh)

Biden said he and first lady Jill Biden extend their “deepest condolences” to the family of the man who was killed in the assassination attempt on Trump.

The president said Corey Comperatore was protecting him family from the bullets that were being fired “and he lost his life.” “God love him,” Biden said.

Trump posted a brief message on social media after Biden spoke, saying ‘UNITE AMERICA!’

Not long before shots rang out, rally goers noticed a man climbing to the top of a roof of a nearby building and warned local law enforcement, according to two law enforcement officials.

One officer climbed to the roof and encountered Crooks, who pointed his rifle at the officer. The officer retreated down the ladder and Crooks quickly took a shot toward former President Donald Trump, and that’s when the U.S. Secret Service counter snipers shot him, said the officials who spoke to The Associated Press on condition of anonymity to discuss an ongoing investigation.

Former President Donald Trump says he’ll travel to Milwaukee on Sunday afternoon ahead of the Republican National Convention.

Trump said on his Truth Social platform that he was going to delay his trip after Saturday’s apparent assassination attempt, but decided he cannot “allow a ‘shooter,’ or potential assassin, to force change to scheduling, or anything else.”

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President Joe Biden speaks from the Roosevelt Room of the White House in Washington, Sunday, July 14, 2024, about the apparent assassination attempt of former President Donald Trump at a campaign rally in Pennsylvania. (AP Photo/Susan Walsh)

President Biden said he’s directed an independent review of the security at the rally Saturday where a gunman apparently tried to assassinate Donald Trump.

Biden said he has also directed the U.S. Secret Service to review all security measures for the Republican National Convention which begins Monday in Milwaukee.

Biden urged Americans not to make assumptions about the motive of the shooter, who was killed by U.S. Secret Service. He says they’re working swiftly to investigate the incident.

“Unity is the most elusive goal of all,” he added, while urging the public to strive for it.

President Joe Biden says he’ll address the nation from the Oval Office on Sunday evening at 8 p.m. following the apparent assassination attempt of Donald Trump at a political rally.

Biden spoke briefly Sunday afternoon saying he and Jill Biden were praying for the family of the person killed at the rally and that he was sincerely grateful that Trump is “doing well and recovering.”

Biden says: “There’s no place in America for this kind of violence, or any violence for that matter.”

An NBC News interview between President Joe Biden and anchor Lester Holt on Monday will now occur at the White House, the network said Sunday.

Initially, the interview was scheduled to take place in Austin, Texas, but the White House announced earlier Sunday that Biden’s trip there has been postponed in the wake of the shooting at a rally for former President Donald Trump.

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In this image provided by the White House, President Joe Biden, center, and Vice President Kamala Harris, fourth from left, are briefed by national security advisers and members of law enforcement agencies on the apparent assassination attempt Saturday on former President Donald Trump in Butler, Pa., in the White House Situation Room in Washington, Sunday, July 14, 2024. (Adam Schultz/The White House via AP)

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